It's not a bad story but I really want to see one where Naruto's just like 'no thanks, I've done enough saving for a lifetime'

I be honest I really loved this story since I read both ur original and ur rewrite
the ones that criticising ur grammar are wrong
this been the most best RWBY x Naruto fanfic I have ever read and I deeply hope u continue making more chapters on this fan fic

I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work!

I'm afraid I have to agree with one of the reviewers, are you certain this is the rewrite? Grammar is all over the place along with spelling errors.I suggest you work on those first before continuing writing. It's getting to the point where my eyes are starting to hurt at seeing these errors. Not to mention it seems.. a lot more worse.. than the original. Things like "Yellow man" and etc,etc. I'll stick around for now, but I don't see myself reading this for the long run.

For the millionth time. GET A FUCKING ENGLISH FLUENT BETA READER! This would be great if your grammar didn't suck.

You need a beta editor. For sure this story has awful grammar I read a lot of fan fiction so I am usually not too picky but this is just bad. Good premise tho

Very good chapter.
Oh, la la. It seems that a certain redhead is interested in our hero.
And here begins the legend.
Waiting for the continuation.

like XD

Awesome chapter keep it up

Cool 3 chapters continue please.

Are you sure this is a rewrite? This entire first chapter is covered with grammatical errors and bad English in general. Read roughly a quarter the way through before giving up.

Cool 2 chapters continue please.

Muy buena la re edición de este capitulo.
Esta historia tiene mucho potencial.
Esperando por la continuación

So far so good

Well, you know... Your grammar still reeeeeeealy bad