Reviews for Unlocked
arinst2305 chapter 8 . 8/27
Hm
Kingkong101 chapter 8 . 8/4
Gay
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22
You have got to warn people about the freaking yaoi
tf chapter 8 . 5/9
wtf you had to make him a faggot really tired of all these faggot storys on here
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 5/6
Well, that was short but not bad either.
lLongPeen chapter 8 . 5/5
You gotta right Yaoi or something in the description a lotta people dont like these types if storys, me included
Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 5/5
I WANT BLOOD! I WANT HEADS ON THE PIKES!
Adriana chapter 8 . 5/4
Me alegra mucho que volverías a escribir por un momento pensé que no volverías a actualizar, gracias por este capítulo por favor actualiza pronto
deniswanheda chapter 8 . 5/4
Muy buena historia, quisiera saber el emparejamiento
Issei Uzumaki chapter 8 . 5/4
Love it, just wish the chapters were longer
TigrezzTail chapter 8 . 5/3
Ah, so much beautiful bonding. So, how exactly are they going to get retribution on the council thieves?
plums chapter 8 . 5/3
honestly, despite however interesting the initial concept is, 1000 words at a time is just frustrating to read, especially as they feel like broken chapters / half finished ideas in some places.

Do you have an outline?
thor94 chapter 8 . 5/3
good chapter.
Hope you plan tsunade drain all involved clans bank account (especially personal account of the thieves clan members) until every single ryo they stolen to naruto was refunded to him and also include indemnities for the crime, and that even if it cause the clan bankrupt.
Don't want them get free about that, i hope a refund and some of the clan ruined.
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 8 . 5/3
Love the new chapter:)
Adriana chapter 7 . 4/13
Por favor continúa con la historia! La estoy esperando con muchas ansias! por favor actualiza pronto!
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