This makes me so happy.

ugh my heart /3 I just love the way u describe things, and YES! like I know each tv series has touched on the whole "martyr leo" thing but being primarily a kids show I dont think they've delved into it as deeply as it deserves.
of course his brothers wouldnt be down with that

I loved your descriptions of their anger, and "coins in the company's sanity mater"? That was awesome! XD so great!

... Wow...! Like...holy WOW! The chapters are so short but they're so INTENSE! This was incredible to read! Absolutely incredible! Thank you for writing this!

Fucking beautiful

this is so epic: "Seething with quiet rage, Leonardo vows that this will never happen again. / In three pairs of eyes, he sees the vow that it will."
Masterstroke. It's so grey - the combination of "aww they love one another to pieces" and the bitterness of a irreconciliable conflict. Kudos!

omg i lost it when Mikey quoted Leo back at him and the focus *on not being so dumb* T.T

I love them protecting each other!

Hamato family trait number 1: Stubborn enough to do the impossible. Including getting Leo to safety first!

I really liked this, a good little look into the brothers heads and how they feel about each other. Well done!

Donnie is trying to tell Leo that he's important too, but Leo is stubborn and why did he have to interpret Splinters words to mean Leo sacrifice himself? Assuming 2k12 of course

Well I'm already hooked. Interesting start, sets the tone and the circumstances well.

Silly Leo, when will that boy learn?

WOW! You are a master storyteller! LOve these short glimpses filled with such emotion and insight. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing

Dude this is so good and perfectly in character! I'm ded
I wish I could give you an all professional Review but honestly this shit got me floored. I love his thinking, I love their reactions, and, finally, their "solution" to the problem. Very well done imo, thank you so much for posting!

AAAAA YAAAY! So happy to see more turts from you! :D Oh my heart, these precious idiots. I love it, I love it. You do such a good job telling a lot of story with very few words. These idiot brothers love each other so much.

Lovely ...this is quite lovely, I love the brotherly emotions and even though it's short ...the impact is well done. Excellent.