Reviews for Saotome Art Online |
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Sungawd Ra chapter 5 . 7/17 I really need to get on discord more. I’m wondering if (when) you might drop a My Hero Academia fic in the future... |
xenahort x chapter 5 . 7/16 okay i am officially confuse: sayuri is dead or kipnaped in the "alfheim"? |
Lasse2731 chapter 5 . 7/16 it's nice to know you're still writing. I hope for more update. do you have any plans for Hell is a Martial Artist |
Farmer Kyle chapter 5 . 7/15 Nice to read from you, Ozzallos! It's been awhile, but I'm happy for the surprise! The chapter didn't seem too short for me, and I couldn't spot any obvious errors. Sorry to hear that Covid has hit you so close. I'll keep you in my prayers. Thanks for sharing with us, and good luck! |
Bookeater-otaku chapter 5 . 7/15 This was the best chapter so far. Switching between the present and the game was very nice and I hope we get to see more therapy sessions and maybe see Ranma talk to some more of the Nerima cast. |
Dragon Man 180 chapter 5 . 7/13 Wow, I'm amazed Ranma opened up like that at the group session. I can't wait to see what happens when Ranma and Sayuri meet Kirito. |
Princess Asuna chapter 5 . 7/13 thanks for the update! |
Skwyshie chapter 5 . 7/13 Was not expecting an update for this, awesome! keep it up, loving this fic. |
Hermione Blackwood chapter 5 . 7/13 More please! I have an idea to add to or otherwise supplement this story/idea that you maaaay not go for, but I'd like to run it by you just in case. It involves Ryoga's place in all of this. Anyway, great read and i know this is the pot calling the kettle a jusenkyou victim, but i can't wait for the next update¡ |
WillItWork chapter 5 . 7/12 I am thrilled to see the series update, and even more happy to see your natural development of ZOMG Ranma-Chan. Speaking of, how does the personal perspective of living as a girl for two years affect Ranma's natural Japanese speech, in such a strongly gendered language? I also like the plot about not disrupting the main arc of SAO, but still making Ranma a character who is crucial to the actual success of the story. Thanks for sharing, and all my best to you and yours during the covids. |
Uldihaa chapter 3 . 7/12 I'm curious as to the amount of yen you list here for the Fund and if such a paltry sum was intentional. Twenty million yen is only $200,000 USD, assuming a 100 yen $1 USD exchange rate. Divide that by 6,000 and you end up with a truly pathetic 3333 yen ($33.33 USD). No Japanese person would even remotely consider that more than relative pocket change. I'm asking because I'd have expected Nabiki to be extremely sarcastic, likely taking a potshot at the government's miserly fund. Ranma would also have been profoundly underwhelmed. |
Treant Balewood chapter 5 . 7/12 It's been long enough that I had forgotten alot of stuff so i reread after finishing the chapter... now i'm sad about Sayuri all over again T_T |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/12 Grammar and spelling are important to be taken seriously. Sad to see you've never gotten better over years of writing. Take some classes or get better betas |
apeljohn chapter 5 . 7/12 This is great. I haven't actually read SAO canon, so I don't know if this is "inherited", but I'm loving the detective vibe and the slow unwinding of reveals. My guess: "Sayuri" is the AI mini-me that's trying to avert its demise. Also, the butler did it. |
PCHeintz72 chapter 5 . 7/12 Hope you get better, or at least not get worse... If looking for stories to update, would not mind more of Not a Clue, A Time Apart, Causality, Jusenkyo Muyo, or Hell is a Martial Artist |