Alright, I am here now. I'm looking for something new that I haven't read two times already (I have a specific tastes ok!) this may be it. I'm curious to see where it goes. It will take me awhile to read (because I'm busy reading the same fic for the third time... It's to good dman it!) but I will read this... slowly but surely.

This is one of my favorite stories. You were able to change canon in a way that felt in line with the show; I could imagine every scene happening (Weiss' moment was heart-wrenching by the way) and I could picture the characters saying every word. I'm glad it had a good conclusion and I'm pleasantly surprised that its Greek Fire since there aren't too many of those. Its also nice that Greek Fire didn't take up the whole story either; it was just a nice little background build-up.
Thank you SO much for sharing this wonderful story with all of us and good luck with all your future writings 'cause judging by this one, youre gonna have a great writing career. Thanks again!

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I dig it!great story! now on to the sequel...

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So I decided to read this after seeing you had a sequel posted for it (which I will now go to read). All I can say is this:

Bloody hell that was brutal!

Particularly the scene with Weiss. I was sat there expecting her to be dead but somehow you managed to have her survive (which I'm thankful for). I cannot begin to fathom what effect such an event will have on her (and her team).

Anyway I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)

Yoooo this was good I love Greek Fire

Didn't see that coming, at all. Holy shit. Good job, I enjoyed the story, but feel mlike maybe you could make a sequel perhaps, but its up to you. Again great work!

I loved this!

A lovely ending to an intense story! I'm glad that everyone survived and the bit between Ruby and Yang was really heartwarming. Plus, the little GreekFire content was awesome too! Great job!

Such a great story! Really enjoyed it although I actually don't ship Greek Fire, but it just fit very well in this contextin my opinion. Keep up the good work!

I'm not a YangxPyrrha fan, but this story was so cool to you for writing this masterpiece.

I was fist pumping and screaming in fangirlish howls towards the end! I really enjoyed the journey Yang went through emotionally in this story, with herself, her mother, and her friends and loved ones. I can't wait to read more of your awesome sauce stuff (:

Nice, ended in a suitably poignant way. I'll admit, it was rough going at first, but everything wrapped up brilliantly. Loved the added twists and changes to canon, even if you did abuse poor Weiss something fierce. The pairing at the end was a nice bonus, too.

Thanks once more for a brilliantly entertaining story. I take back all the mean things I was thinking about you at the start. :3

Seriously, though, I'm so very glad I stuck with this to the end. For anyone reading the reviews and unsure about starting it - do so. It's very much worth it in the end, trust me.

So nice to see Yang accept her injury in a positive way. So many stories and cannon have had Yang so down. Yang knows without a doubt that she herself changed destiny, and the loss of her arm was a small price to pay. Glad to see she returned Ruby's 'I love you'. Greek fire is not me, but it fit well with this story. A beautifully written piece, and look forward to your future projects. Thank you!

I haven't been reviewing this story as often as I should, and I apologize for that, but I wanted to say that it is an extraordinarily good story, one of your best. Everyone had to fight and struggle hard; sacrifices were made, but it was all worth it in the end. I'm glad that Yang was able to say 'I love you' back to Ruby, and I'm glad she and Pyrrha recognized their feelings for each other.

Thanks again for another great story.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.