| Reviews for Empress of the West: Naruko's Reign |
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   Shadow Walker of Fire chapter 12 . 7/12 Story looks great. Your spelling and grammar have improved since chapter one but they still need some work. Look forward to reading more. |
| Stratos263 chapter 12 . 6/20 Yeah right Sasuke. Not it will be your work it is Mundus as Sasuke you are just a pawn as you always will be. |
| anthonym3 chapter 1 . 6/19 Grammar on first chapter is kinda rough in places... dialogue is somewhat basic ... an interesting premise... how did Naruko know the significance of Deidara? Spies or plot knowledge... ? Far too much monologing during a fight between Naruko and her lesser. Fingers crossed that it gets better! |
| jeremiahkelley93 chapter 12 . 6/19 great chapter. |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 12 . 6/18 Awesome story continue please. |
| UnsanMusho chapter 12 . 6/18 A shame that Asia died |
| Power of Magic chapter 12 . 6/18 Good to see your back, and an interesting chapter. Looking forward to what happens in the next one |
| WeeDevil chapter 12 . 6/18 Awesome chapter |
| hcook10 chapter 12 . 6/18 Too bad about Issei, I actually watched Highschool DxD out of curiosity and loved the plot but the characters were good but almost all annoying. I don't really like the Cattlya lemon becuase it feels more like a rape then a lemon. |
| Black Dragon of Celestial God chapter 12 . 6/18 Awesome chapter |
| zero fullbuster chapter 12 . 6/18 Love it. Great to have you back in this story. I can't wait what happens next. Great update as always. |
| Monster King chapter 12 . 6/18 Awesome |
| god of all chapter 12 . 6/18 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| WeeDevil chapter 11 . 4/1 Really hope you continue this amazing story |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 3/10 Great story hope you continue |
