I don't suppose there's a chance of more of this story, is there? I love a good Mary / Fitzwilliam story, and this has the feeling of a good one! The only thing I see that's off-putting is the good Colonel's Christian name, which is Richard, not Henry. Please consider writing more?

Got my copy and have just finished reading this and loved it . I have posted a review on Goodreads and Amazon Canada

I so terribly want to continue this story now that I've started! I don't have a kindle, are there any other ways to purchase it? T_T

This story is so amazing, but I can't buy it on Amazon. Sigh.

Yep. One chapter in, and I'm hooked! Just bought it on Amazon!

I had already read your story, so just bought it to support you. It's quite well done, clearly superior to most authors of the genre, and one can see that you spent a lot of time getting it right.

I enjoy your story, but am highly annoyed that you put it here. I come to this site to read free and interesting stories, not for people to use this site as advertisement just to get people to buy something.

I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I enjoyed it completely. I always worried about Mary . Excellent story.

Really enjoyed your story. I have a soft spot for Mart and also love a good Colonel/Mary pairing. Thank you for sharing!

Well done. Though I sometimes found Mary's "pricklyness" annoying, I understand how difficult it must have been to soften her character without changing her completely.

Thank you for writing! Lovely story!

good story.

I loved this! It was really sweet watching Mary's character change and develop :) I'm glad you acknowledged her more irritating characteristics as well though.

Wow, very interesting

Just reread your delightful story.