This really is a good story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Sirius will do to those bullies.

It would be interesting if Snape turns out to be the bully in this story and Lily defends James.

I am so happy that you are writing this. I have run out of marauders fanfic ages ago, and it seems that nobody wants to write .ore. Please continue and it is great so far

This chapter was brilliant! I look forward to the next one!

It was actually good and I hope that whatever prank that Sirius and James are planning include Fabian and Gideon.

I am so happy that you are writing this. I have run out of marauders fanfic ages ago, and it seems that nobody wants to write .ore. Please continue and it is great so far

Looks like we're beginning to see a rivalry form between James and Severus. Great stuff!

I'm really enjoying this story, and didn't think it was shoddily written at all! I do feel very sorry for James though, and hopes he manages to make even a slight bit of progress soon!

I love how the Marauders are interacting. Please continue to update regularly - your story is awesome!

Absolutely brilliant so far. Keep it up!

Nice concept! It'll be interesting if Snape turns into the bully because of James's disability and it's Lily that puts a stop to Snape. Love to see more!

please keep writing

I love the premise for this story, and look forward to the next chapter. It will be interesting to see how the first meeting with Lily, Snape and Sirius goes!

This is brilliant :)