This is really good I hope you update the story.

Haaaah...
Another Naruto/Serafall story that didn’t even take off. You’re an incredible writer; I’d love to see where this story goes.

Please continue this great story.

This is freaking awesome bro keep it up I'm so very much looking forward to seeing the next update

This was great! Are you still working on this? Thanks for the great read

Rasengan and Shadow Clones for those canon fodder? Seems a bit extreme, actually seems very extreme.

Love this, especially how Naruto is apparently one of the first reincarnated devils. Love the moments with Serafall and Naruto, can't wait for more.

Really sweet with “ starting a family” but yea maybe add in a lil flashback on how he get into dxd world. Hope you can update soon. A big fan of your works

Still waiting for the update

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...
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Ok, I'm interested in your fic. I hope to see you at some point continue, regards.

Good story so far. But I’m kinda mad. I was expecting Naruto to systematically end the lives of the magicians, but all he did was knock them out. Kinda disappointed. But otherwise, your story brought a much needed smile to my face. Keep it up!

please update this story! i have been looking for more narutoxserafall pairings (especially those without huge harems). i love how sweet naruto and serafall are together so please don't give up on this gem of an idea/story

pls more update

Would love to see more.
Love it!