Loved it! It had an interesting start, with Weiss following Blake so they could make up. Felt great reading how Blake shut Weiss’ father up and then it ended with an enjoyable stay at Blake’s parents.

Thanks for writing!

Uh oh... Adam why are you there? Diz iz bad.

I loved it, thank you!

This is pretty good and I do love me some monochrome but there are a lot of examples (and I do mean a lot) of telling instead of showing. It is hard to cover large periods of time without doing this but in my opinion it reads much better if you can keep everything present tense and show development through actions and dialogue, not telling through narration. For example writing out Weiss and Blake's conversation at the statue may not be the purpose of this fic, but it would have definitely made it stronger. Or how it's stated that weiss is changing her ways regarding faunus being stated in a sentence instead of having an entire scene dedicated to internal thoughts in a relevant situation like Cardin picking on some faunus and Weiss realizing she truly finds it disgusting. That would be a excellent way to display character growth while still keeping it relatively brief.

That said this is fanfiction and you're free to write whatever you want, how you want. Just some hopefully helpful advice to think about next time you're starting up a story. At least for me the stories that truly speak to me are the ones that take the longer time to draw everything out to show what's happening, even if it does take a frustratingly long time to get to the part the author obviously really wanted to write. Good luck writing!

Cute piece. Thank you :)

Lovely :)

Good stuff.

This was unexpected!

Nothing wrong with reading a classic scene once in a while :)

*Hisses angrily at Jacques Schnee*

What a great chapter. Haven't enjoyed a story as much as this in a while!

Wow, this is great! I definitely approve of this direction!

A lovely way to end this piece. Great job. :)

A very nice end to the story, though as usual, it leaves me wanting more, both from you and from the show. ;) I very much want the team to get back together.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

I'm shamed to see this story end...but it seems like this story could have a sequel with how the last lines seem to be open ended. Not sure if you meant it that way or not, but that's how I'm taking it. *nods*

I completely expect Ghira to be the one to dole out Adam's ass kicking in canon, but a massive part of me hopes it's Kali. I can just imagine Ghira saying something cliché like "I'm not the one you should be scared of" before Kali goes into full on badass mode and decimates Adam in seconds. Feel free to use this idea in any if your fics if you want btw :)

Anyway I've rambled on a bit too much there. I really enjoyed this epilogue - but then again I'm a massive sucker for happy endings.