Reviews for Heliocentrism |
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Arkantos Zarlfright chapter 3 . 7/10 Loved everything about this :D I wonder just what shenanigans Minato will get up to next?! |
jrowe527 chapter 1 . 6/28 While Gamer fics are fun, people’s reactions to people who run on gamer logic is even better. Couldn’t stop laughing throughout this, it was hilarious. |
Chisaki Kouu chapter 3 . 5/24 I guess the edo tensei wore off, and the chapter really did kill him. Rest In Peace. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/17 Really enjoyed reading this - a very fresh take on the Gamer!Genre. I can’t wait to see Kushina’s reaction to Minato’s words. Is Minato going to save Uzushio? Great plot and great characterisation. I love all the outsider POVs. Looking forward to your next chapter! |
Clark the Lion 8181 chapter 3 . 5/5 more now plz now now just to let you know there is a lot of cussing coming up so viewer discretion advised Kay Kay good by then plzifyoudontmakemorechaptersiwillfinedyouandstabyouwitharustysporkinthedickyoumotherfuckingbichyassholegoddamefuckingniggerassbichsoyoubetterfuckingposedanotherchapteryoustupidfuckthisbookittogoodtowaitforokyoubettergetitorelsearustysporkeistheleastofyoupornlumes. |
So chapter 3 . 4/13 Did the story kill you? Your plotting is interesting and I enjoy the fast pace. Hope you're still writing, or on to original fiction. |
MystiYew chapter 3 . 4/6 This is awesome. I look forward to more. |
cornalia rosalie hale chapter 3 . 4/3 Oh please continue there's no fic like yours and i fell in love with it from first paragraph |
Anon chapter 1 . 3/31 Wait, gamer fics exist? Alright excuse me as I go on a procrastination spree- |
ManticoreBlues chapter 3 . 3/27 hope you update soon |
sistercity chapter 3 . 2/20 Enjoyed this immensely. Hope you are able to write more! :D |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/7 A shame the news of it updating were premature. Or if the fourth chapter is gonna take a year to finish, this story will never get anywhere. |
vwheel10 chapter 3 . 2/2 Oh my gosh it's Kushina. Even better, Minato BLeW uP a trAiNIng FEILD. |
ultraclosetfan chapter 1 . 1/1 Wait, so did Minato seal Kurama into Naruto, die and wake up in a gamer verse of his life? |
JakOvsumTrade chapter 3 . 12/27/2019 Hopefully you're not actually dead. The summary didn't lie, I never knew I needed this but I do. |