Omg part twwwwooooo

Omg! You have to write a second part! This was sooo funny xD

This was such a cute story. You should continue...please :)

Awesome short. Love the originality. Would love it read more. Thanks heaps for sharing

Oh My Aca God! Can't wait for next chapter!

Loved it! Is there more!

oh my gooood! i LOVE, seriously, how you wrote this and how you set the scenes so vividly and simplistically and made it felt like i truly was just watching the whole thing play out before my eyes. my favorite parts definitely have to be the beca chloe interactions. you gave me butterflies! from the initial moment where they make eye contact and chloe winks to the little moment where chloe was pressing into beca after the first house all the way to the kiss on becas cheek like YOU GOT ME SHOOK. this was honestly so great