This belongs in the Anime world. Find your story under "Manage Stories" and select it from the dropdown menu that says "World: Any" in the "Category" section.

You should separate your author notes with a horizontal line; otherwise, they look like part of the story.

["Well thank you Satoshi-kun,"]

You're writing in English, not Japanese. Localize this properly.

This was really cute, I love how it ended, very sweet! :)

Awwwh, this was so cute! 3