Continua

I love this story! You are a great writer. Please update soon!

Hey! Your fic isn't bad, quite good actually, just one advise: don't make Sakura a Mary Sue, she can't just be good at everything (the most mature, intelligent, fast, strong, kind, sweet...) That's awful. The best part of a character is his/hers imperfections because that's what makes who they are. Sakura is a human being too, she just can't be perfect.
That's just a friendly constructive criticism, don't take it bad.

Hmm interesting chapter, I feel this will be a much different outcome then the original one. Kakashi is in for a surprise. Can’t wait to see how it goes!

That flashback of Kakashi and Sakura was very sweet. If Sakura's out of role models, Kakashi could be it.

ok so shikamaru and sakura are the main. this will be fun cant wait to see them play shoji... i am glad you make sakura to be as person who doesnt care about insect. good chapter. keep it up. I really like this team

This is such an interesting take on the story and I can't wait to see where you go with it! cheers!

There is a fangirl for every team except Shikamaru's. Poor boys.

I like this new team of yours. Any team with Sasuke-Naruto pair in it is going to lead to depression for the third member. They are toxic together and I'm glad they didn't pair up in your story.

Sakura, Shikamaru, and Shino are quite a badass team. Remember in canon, Sakura and Shikamaru were the only ones to become Jounin. In the future, each one of them has the potential to become Kakashi level shinobi. (Hokage level for Sakura)

I never thought the Shikamaru-Sakura friendship would work so well. Chouji-Shikamaru friendship was always my favorite but now Sakura seems to be a better a match, or, rival.

I'm very interested how this new team will turn out!

yahoo welcome back so happy to see you again. I love this team! so new so I am very excited! Shino and Shiku r my favourite people to be with sakura. I am glad you make sakura as someone who dont mind bugs. I do hope you can make her interest in them and learn about them so it can get her closer to shino like she will b with shikamaru over the shoji game

I like i like ilke nice team
Continous please

This made my day to read!

awesome. so far, I am loving this. Eager to read more.

Bitch! You best update! PLEASEEEEEEE

Chapter two btw