muito bom.

I’ve not really been a person to talk about the short comings of what people write but if this is supposed to be a pyrrah and jaune switch it really isn’t. I’ve been thinking about this ever since he nearly lost to yang in his first fight and now loseing to Weiss it just wouldn’t happen.

See you soon.

Glad to hear from you already. A very nice and lovely chapter, i loved these interactions and i really can't wait to see the dance, all charachters are such badass sweetheart. Regarding Ruby's date, i can send you an oc i created some time ago, but make as you wish.

I'm glad you came back, this was a very badass fight and i'm very happy you made this version of Pyhrra more realistic than canon!Jaune(in the sense, here she has at the very least a basic training and knowledge about Aura), if she continues to train and update her equipment, she could eventually become even stronger than her canon self. I can't wait to see next chapters, keep up the good work and see you soon, i'm also free for advices about lore and whathever you need. By the way, Sunday was my birthday and i consider the chapter your gift.

This chapter had was written pretty oddly. It kept switching between third person and first person within paragraphs, the flow kept being broken because of that? Also did you change Nora's semblance from electricity absorbtion to super strength? Or is Nora just havin a laugh?

ohoho she snapped

Every time I read Pyrrhas dialogue my mind gives her a scottish accent XD

Pretty good chapter. I'm glad thath,despite being truly a knight in shining armor here, your Jaune isn't totally perfect and has still his flaws.I can't wait to see next chapters and whath you will do with Amber(maybe Ozpin will make the propose to Blake or Weiss this time?).Aniway, keep up the good work and see you later, i also hope you had a good Christmas and will have a great year.

Not bad, i'm curious to see who will go to the dance with Ruby(i'll feel slightly jealous, she's my waifu). Keep up the good work and see you later.

So good hey, is this the end?

It's really good

Daaaaaaaaaaammmmmnnnnn so good (for all chapters so far)

Not bad chapter. Keep up the good work and see you later.

Cause blakey lookey cutey with out her bowey