omg, i’m already in live with this and when i get to the end, i find that that’s all there is. i’m sad, this was really great. and i never ctually noticed allen always pining first until you mentioned it, LOL. i just love great stories. yours is one of them. i hope you one day find the inspiration to continue this. have a blessed day! :)

i hope you will continue this story. i'm genuinely curious as to see how this will all unfold. And I agree. most of the fanfics i've read have never been Kanda to fall in love first. even if it is the case, it's portrayed in a really possessive kind of manner.

hopefully you find the motivation to continue. thank you for sparing your time and creativity to write this. i really enjoyed a great day

Oh my...ooooooo i hope u will continue this amagadddd *heart*

Yes. Love this, can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon, I love all your stories and I cant wait for this one to continue

I love this. I don't typically love AUs but I loved how you wrote Kanda's POV especially when being around Allen. I love the scenario of two strangers meeting in the park each with their own secrets and reasons. I thought it was hilarious when Lavi broke the ice for them both. I'm like the mysterious reveal from Allen at the end. Great work. I'm looking forward fo more.

Hope you add another chapter soon! I love the idea of kanda falling for allen first!

Is that all of this story there's gonna be? I got totally into it and then it stopped... ): Please tell me there's gonna be more! It's such a good idea! And you're really good at writing! o:

Oh my goodness, this is actually really cute. Wow, just wow. I can't get over how adorable Kanda is and the twist with Allen I really didn't see coming. I love your writing style too. Please, please continue!

Ahhhh...that's why why I think I did read this story somewhere haha
Nice like always

Lol that prompt itself is very hooking! I enjoyed this first chapter, can't wait for more!

OMG! Está súper! Espero la continuación con ansias!

I literally saw this on tumblr last night! Yay!

This chapter seems really interesting, so it all started when they met in a park. Can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter.