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Aww this was cute one shot

Interesting idea/story. -

My head hurt reading the end of this...

I keep coming back to this. There's something about it, it seems almost like a dream the way it's written. That doesn't sound right. Can't find the right words. It's intreaging and whimsical. not sure I would want it extended. I like to close my eyes and let it unfold in my head.

I like the examples of social familial bonding you've inserted into this little one-shot. Very cute. Yes...the age old problem of being infatuated with the new step-mom. [Tisk, tisk.] The near identical twist...interesting angle. One for dad; one for Kyoya. Lol...nicely played.

THIS IS SO GOOD!
I like all the twists and turns in this story. Quite unique and endearing.
Good job!

I love this story! It's like Haruhi time traveled back and was able to marry Yoshio.

I will be the first to let you know, I am the reigning queen of crack shipping. I will ship just about anyone. And this is such a neat idea! I would have loved to see the story of how the crotchety old Yoshio Ootori fell in love in such unusual circumstances! You have my five star full support.

I wonder if Haruhi and Yoshio will have children? Should be interesting to see that and how Kyoya will react, ne?

I didn't know I needed this fic, then you wrote it and made me happy. Congrats for this story!

Not often I find a unique story with this paring, thank you for sharing. I do think you can write a longer story, and if you do I will read it :)

i think it can continue, you left it with such a good cliff hanger that i want to read more. I really want to know if he and his step mothers niece become a couple and if the other club members go after her as well.

I wold love see this expanded

Fantastic :)