Poor, poor, poor Janus. This is entirely in-character for how FUBAR Queen Zeal was... The worst part is that I can now think of this happening to the YOUNG Janus if Queen Zeal had any inkling of his power.

Poor Janus. Also, from a technical standpoint, it's good to read a fic with rape that doesn't go for brutality or excruciating mechanical detail for shock value. It just makes it worse (from a sympathy standpoint - the writing's superb) that he's "technically" going through the motions of consent while forcing himself into traumatic flashbacks to make himself comply. Poor Janus. Whatever he did as Magus, this is downright sickening - and all the more horrifying because it makes perfect sense.

Excellent job. Really good fic.

What. The. fuck. Did. I. Just. Read. No. Janus was already fucked up in the head...Now that he fucked his own mother?...Worry not fiend lord. You shall be on the party to slay the evil Zeal queen. I'll be sure of it! Now, shock aside, this was pretty good...In a dark and twisted kind of good, but good no the less.
Sure, people always make Lil ol' Janus incestuous...But always to his sister. Not that he was incestuous here, at least. If it was me and my mother from the past while being driven to madness from an evil Space Flea of doom and destrucion...I'd just kill her and go on with my life consequences be damned. Or Kill myself. The second option is pretty promising...

This was twisted, dark, and I loved it.