More than half of every chapter you post is authors notes and/or flashbacks. So annoying

So...where's the rest?

I have enjoyed your story a lot. I hope you will consider continuing with the story.
Thank You for the story.

Ewwww. She had sex with Snape!? Gross as F***!

AWWWWW. You killed off Lily and her daughter. :((

Hi I just found this and wanted to thank you. I like Broomsticks story's as well. I hope to read much more on your take.
I trust Gawain is Gawain Robards and Amelia is Amelia Bones/ Was Sirus sent to prison? will he blood adopt Harry so that he can betroth Hermione and someone else to Harry to cover both the Potter and Black blood lines Thus avoiding line theft. Oh I so want to read more PLEASE

Looking forward to the next chapter. I noticed the story was on a mid-season break until middle of May so I hope to see a chapter soon!

I look forward to more. Where does Severus fit into this twisted tale?

I'm always in the mood for James bashing.

I really like this story. It's a fabulous read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Very different.

Excellent! How does James expect to survive?

What a beginning. "The Greater Good" quote does it for me.

This has a lot of potential please update soon. Only one small criticism please don't repeat half of the previous chapter above the new one just a small short synopsis will do.

Actualiza pronto me gusta mucho la historia