You Bastard... Ygritte was and is my favorite female character and pairing for Jon... And you took her and used her to inspire feeling of being cucked in Jon... I love the story so far and imma keep reading it... But I just had to let my feelings be known about that particular move you made... As a man who has been cheated on multiple times, it brought back unpleasant feels that I had thought I had gotten over...

Wow didn’t even kill Danny lol waste of my time reading wow I wish o never read this garbage

You fucker im dead and crying now

I like it -Tormund Giantsbane

Well what happened to Ygritte made this a drop lol I didn’t think Jon snow was this much of a better swordsman but so whiny and somehow thought a wildling would be fine lol drop

A change of heart is a very beautiful thing

Wow Ned, you have game, and did you ever think for a second that you have just committed Kinslaying? "It is always the quiet ones".

This is for sure my favourite purely GOF fan-fiction story! there are a few crossovers I tend to prefer. However as a purely GOF fic I love it!

Okay we get it. It’s fucking cold. Doesn’t take half a page to explain that.

You have got to breakup your paragraphs more.

Fucking stupid story

Man just read that all in 2 Sessions your writing Style is amazing I just love your work! Keep it up.

Excellent story, by far one of the better ones in the GoT community that I've read.

Keep up the great work

Dude inner turmoil things are stupid. At this day and age the GoT is based in killin someone isn’t that traumatizing. Why, well because people die all the time and you tend to become desensitized to death when it’s all around you. Sure you might be a little shaken if your a bit of a pansy but this is extreme. Also was it necessary to kill the chick.

Tywin wouldn’t want blood for a Lannister that was sent to the black. The guy literally means nothing to the lannisters now.