Reviews for The Advocate
Nevcolleil chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
This is BEAUTIFUL, absolutely beautiful.
fanotheboyz chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
So sweet. Very well done! You got them completely in character and still managed to show Jack's care and concern for Mac. I loved it!
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Uhmm chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
Lovely fic, Loved the h/c and the the medical inaccuracies about nitrogen bugged me a bit.
Nitrogen (N2) is an inert gas. That means it does not interact with our body's sytems and cells at all. It's just simply there in our blood. Other nitrogen compounds such as nitric oxide (NO) do play an important role in our body, but not the gaseous N2.
Normal air that we breath is around 78% N2, and 21% O2. If we increase the amount of nitrogen in the air, we decrease the amount of oxygen available for us to breath, therefore leading to asphyxiation. Any consequences of excess nitrogen is due to asphyxiation, not directly due to nitrogen it self.
Above is probably nitpicking, but it just bugged me. That aside, great fic!
Dragonflysoul chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Lovely!
Effie17 chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
I love the hospital scene. I can feel Jacks angst.
Hybrid-Cookie376 chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
This was really great, the character voices were really good. I love Jack being with Mac the whole time, helping and staying with Mac every step of the way.
avictoriangirl chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
Loved this!
only-some-loser chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
This is super good. I love it
bree1387 chapter 1 . 1/19/2017
Great story! So many feels. And it just felt so realistic. Mac's increasing confusion and agitation, Jack apologizing while restraining him, Jack knowing where to start an IV on Mac, all those little details really made the story. I hope you write more in this fandom!
Whumplove chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Thank you for this magnificent, friendship story! The ending is just perfect!
Ridley C. James chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Wow. Just an amazing and beautifully detailed tag to this episode. The characterizations are perfect. I so hope you will continue to share your talent and expand on other episodes.
Just wow.

Ridley
TheGirlWhoRemembers chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
This is beautiful! We can never, ever, ever have enough Jack and Mac bromance! Welcome to the fandom!
TinkerBella7 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
I adore Mac Whump and this here story is Mac Whump at it's finest. LOVE IT! Well done. More and more and more, please!
parisindy chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Omg that was awesome! Hope you write more soon
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