The writing style and actual characters are spot on LOL.

catspats31, that was the most politely written complaint about an idiotic difference between a Mature rating and a MAture rating I've ever seen.
also, nice story.

oh gosh no, I love the story but I don't like the fact Kiba saw Koneko naked

great job love the story line good mix issei x koneko looking for more

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own.