| Reviews for Pawn to Queen |
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   SoAnthony chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 i don't really review things but that would be an awesome start to a story nice job |
| ManticoreBlues chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 can you make this a story, it's really good and It would make a very good fanfic |
| hnh058513 chapter 1 . 11/17/2018 A few parts of salem in this match lost fable and volume 6's depiction |
| Videocrazy chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 Augh, why would you /do/ this? Do you have any idea how hard it is to find a story like this?! A darker Ruby whose metamorphosis isn't done with a fingersnap, that seems to have well-written characters, and isn't a grammatical mess? And it's a one-shot! Ok, yes, I knew it was a one-shot going in, but I figured it'd be short scenes with a time-skip, not the first chapter of an epic. The writing here is so emotionally charged, so thought out, that it's downright powerful. Out of all the fics like this I've seen, all the swiftly-abandoned stories, all the ones on hiatus or cancelled, all the stories with interesting concepts that are nigh-unreadable, I lament this one the most. Maybe that's in part due to the myriad paths in front of it. I couldn't say for certain. Either way, I can't help but feel a great loss at what could have been. |
| The Dude Strikes Back chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 Oh man this is SO GOOD and it's seriously well done here I hope one day you think of continuing this cause this is simply fantastic |
| osterreicher97 chapter 1 . 9/24/2018 A very interesting twist on the story, but I wonder if it became a story, who would be the one commanding and/ or helping Cinder? Some aspects of the plot would have to be reworked, but it is overall a good alternate plotline that makes more sense in regards to Salem. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 Kinda disappointing. You have the most creative idea on fanfiction and you waste it by ending with a oneshot. You could easily turn this into 30 or more chapters and the best fanfiction that will exist but you wasted it's potential completely |
| CR4Z1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 Wow |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 That was good. I like the perspective you gave for Salem as a person. I do wonder however if she really is good. Really she seems just like another contender. Good ending. Good Person Test. |
| Discordant Rose chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 This is absolutely incredible... I want a full story built on this idea now. I need it... |
| Ninjafairytama chapter 1 . 4/1/2018 Good one-shot! This would actually be a pretty good series! |
| gothboy.wxlf chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 NO THIS HAS TO CONTINUE! NO THIS MUST CONTINUE |
| Pikanet128 chapter 1 . 2/23/2018 Amazing darn I want more |
| trulyBabzz chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 This is amazing, I adore it. Please make it into a full story, there's so much you could do and it would be amazing. |
| TheMaster4444 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017 This is terrifying yet great. |
