kick ass story. thanks for the wonderful read!

At least I have fanfictions to tide me over till my 24 hour facebook ban gets lifted.

I connect with that comma bit you talked about at the end on a spiritual level

This fan fiction was nothing short of a masterpiece. Weiss’ struggles with her own identity and sexuality were written in such a raw realistic way parts of it actually broke my heart especially around chapter 8 And once that arc finished and the main story began I was far from disappointed. This story was beautiful throughout all 29 chapters and I eagerly await the sequel if that’s still something you’re considering. Perhaps a one shot detailing Weiss’ proposal to Yang and their wedding would be a nice sendoff. However if this is the final ending all I have to say is thank you for creating such an incredible story

like I said in "on Sisters and Girlfriends" I don't get the Freezerburn-ship but say gladly again: ur the proof that even Freezerburn story's could be really really lovely, sweet and overall amazing.
so I hope ur muse will never get out of ideas for u so u can provide us with more of ur art. until then read'ya ;D

This has been a very enjoyable read. I'm sad it ended, but it was a good end. Proper closure.

BTW, please update over on AO3. Don't leave those folks hanging at chapter 25 :)

So the world is not complicated, only our understanding of it is... perhaps? Maybe that's not quite right, but I guess at the very least, the some things are definitely are... is the thing, isn't it. I get the feeling that this whole story won't entirely be about Yang teaching Weiss, though... after all, it's not as if Yang doesn't have anything to learn either.

Oh my god. Yang pls treasure weiss. It look like she is the only one who won't leave you

No, come on. I just found this story, and it's already over?
This is probably the best romance story I've read so far.

Fantastic! This was the ending the story needed. So glad you decided to put it out. Looking forward to the sequel!

With regards to my last comment: this ending definitely fits better. Don't forget to change the tag to complete again, though. Cheers.

I feel as if the story ended literally during the climax. Like, 27 chapters of rising action, which is fine, but then it just... Ends. I understand the angle of your ending, but the timing of it couldn't have been worse... Mayhap there's a sequel in the works? That all aside, everything else about the story was great, and best of all, believable. You have talent, sir. Cheers.

Nice Story... a real ending or epilogue would be nice. ;) Just saying. Thank you for the work.

"Clap" "clap" "clap" That was the best freezer buen I've evet read. Keep it up!
P. D. Are you gonna do any epilogues?

Whitley really is a little shitbag, isn't he? I hope serious harm comes to him, onscreen or otherwise.