Reviews for Child of the Forest and the Ocean
SteamRowlin chapter 8 . 6/8
Wennerholm
[Cadmas was never destroyed and The Scientists and guards and Soldiers were never put to death for the violation of the laws of Creation and it pure nature and purpose.]
People like you need to have therapists defy the natural order by administering electroshock therapy to your defunct brains. Cadmas' problem was the purpose behind their research and not the research of genetic manipulation itself. Also, your insane religious ravings have no place here. Just in case you not noticed, Harry is a product of the very thing youre p!$$!ng and moaning about; scientific research into genetic manipulation and crossbreeding. Except it gets worse than that, he was also formed with magic. Hell, his mother is a product of a pagan god and theyre both magic practitioners with Lily pulling his soul right out from under gods nose, assuming your god even exists in this story.
Also, by your own logic, immunity shots are an act of defying god and the natural order. Hell, so is clothing and cooking. In fact, if we're being religiously anal about all this, you are defying god and the natural order by eating genetically altered food, using computers and reading literature. According to your own beliefs, you have committed an offense fit for capital punishment and worthy of eternal damnation.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 8 . 5/17
In other words immoral and unethical sciences that according to the laws of The Heavenly Father and Creator is illegal and sadly most 9f humanity never learns because they are violating The Laws of nature as set commanded By The Father who is The Creator of Everything. This kind 8f bullshit occurred pre-flood and was only one of many things that resulted in Just about everything being destroyed during the flood except for what The Creator chose to save. everything else was destroyed because it was corrupted and no longer met and followed what they were ment to be when created. So genetic engineering and cloning is a crime/sin against nature and God.

And from what I remember from 5he Comics as well as the cartoon TV shows and Movies And could never get why that when 5he stories were told that Cadmas was never destroyed and The Scientists and guards and Soldiers were never put to death for the violation of the laws of Creation and it pure nature and purpose.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14
Absolutely fucking retarded
Silverwingzz chapter 11 . 1/28
So you don’t really care about canon huh?
dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 2 . 10/8/2019
god i hope orn didn't make her have sex with him, the only one for ivy is harley, pamela x harley for the win
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 20 . 8/23/2019
Good story!

Not sure about posting it under Young Justice, they were only there twice.
TheUnHolySmirk chapter 20 . 7/7/2019
This had almost nothing to do with Harry Potter or Young justice.
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 20 . 4/10/2019
This was a pretty great story. I do feel like somehow both the DC and HP universes were neglected, and I wish you had pulled in more elements of both. Especially the HP, as there was almost none of it in the story. But that's a common problem with crossovers, and I still enjoyed the story a lot.

Also, you mention characters tucking strands of hair behind their ears a lot. It's not a huge problem, but it really stands out when you read the entire story at once, and it's something to be aware of.
DOS73 chapter 20 . 3/12/2019
Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it and I hope you will keep up the great work.
Ninja Master chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
Great so far
DukeSomerset chapter 20 . 10/17/2018
wait no, we need to know about the ankh. Sequel please
Tempest S chapter 10 . 7/9/2018
To be honest, Harry's powers seem to fluctuate. What he's capable of doing and how much it tires him or affects him physically. He healed his mother, who's connected to the green so it should have been easier, and it tired him out yet he healed Doctor Polaris, who was also burned, with no trouble or effects at all. He also was tired and shaking after healing Garth. Some times he seems to be able to do more and be perfectly fine and others, he does less but has a headache or is drained. Also, Harry said if he was separated from the elements he has a connection with, he would be powerless. He said right before that that he didn't need words or spells to use his magic if he has one of his elements. Even if he was separated from his elements, he could still use his magic, just use words and spells to channel it instead.
WhiteElfElder chapter 20 . 6/11/2018
Did they use their unborn child to contain Nabu? That is kind of Naruto-ish.
WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 6/11/2018
Figures that Tom wold be a demon instead of a human. However, they screwed up because they have given Harry all the will he needs to rend them apart.
WhiteElfElder chapter 12 . 6/11/2018
A over protective Aunt Harley...this is going to be fun.
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