THIS IS GOOD... VERYVERY GOOD!
PLEASE FINISH IT

VERY VERY GOOD!

I am so. glad. to see who the fourth is. I am also glad that you stopped hoping around. This is really good, but the rewrite is so much better!

Wait why did Hermione change her name so much? That test she did that showed her real parents and name the name on the paper was HERMIONE Carina Black, not Carina Violetta. If 'Hermione Carina' really is supposed to be her name, then why ditch it to become 'Carina Violetta'?

Very interesting beginning.

I binged this fic and I absolutely love it! Keep updating lad and you’re talented for real!

gotta love the little beans

Oh dear, making ron a jerk and draco a friend. I was struggling with dark Harry, but dark Neville and friends with Draco, I can't go there. It's a great premise and well written though.

Love it

I waited what seemed like forever, and it was worth it! :) Great chapter.

I just love that my favorite characters are besties. Love how they’re all so close and affectionate.

This is one awesome story! I can't wait for more:)

All I can say is ... WOW! I love this story! What a great story line. I just can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for all the hard work you have put into this fine story, it really does shine.

Thanks,

Layne

Hmm I will be stopping reading this story, but just because it isn't my thing not that it is a bad story. I would suggest for future stories if you are going to try and give Harry a more adult attitude you back off on the temper a bit. It made him feel more like a brat who wouldn't want to see anyone else's point of view. It made me feel really bad for Sirius who has sacrificed so much for him. Sure as when I was a kid I was more mature then I seemed, but when you are that type of mature you tend to look at peoples point of views before jumping the gun. I was hoping to see a scene where Harry and the other kids were talked to so I could see a more adult Sirius handle the situation caused but it hasn't happened so far so it feels like it was pushed under the rug even if it does happen after this chapter. Good work though that was my only real complaint for the story. Love Nev and Draco just can't really like Harry that much after the Temper issue. If you want to rant or anything at me that is my username up top just didn't feel like logging in right at the moment.

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