Haa, I was wondering if you will write them as grown ups too! Great story, absolutely loved it!

PS - your writing in English is really nice, I actually didn't think you are not a native speaker at first :)

I am having a veeeery hard time imagining J... ack as a highschool boy without green hair and smidged face paint haha :D This story is tons of fun and also interesting and intense, love it! Gonna keep reading :)

I enjoyed this story thoroughly!

AHHHHH! I NEED TO SLEEP but holy crap this is amazing i cried a few times. a sequel would be amazing. thanks for sharing!

yes of course we want a sequel. you don't even need to ask. can Jackson play a major role?

this was so good. I WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL!

Personally, it escalated a bit too quickly. I would have preferred it if you had actually put more detail in to Jackson and his childhood and also did Jack not change over time? Did he not meet other people or is he just commited to Sonia?

Amazing chapter! Keep up the great writing!

Loving this story! Poor Sonja! Hope she starts to ignore Jack after this as he is an ass! Think her silence would bother him more than her trying to out do him by hooking up with someone else. Shows him she is worth more. Loving your writing those 2 last chapters have brightened up my full day! Thank You
Eagerly await the next instalment! Xxx

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Oh no. Is he going to ship her back home? Or does he feel (even if it's miniscule) something for her?

Really good. More lust filled fights would be good. Him being the alpha male trying to mark her as his. Really good.

Great chapter xx

Tried so hard not to laugh but I failed...lol

Please continue