WHAT THE FUCK!
NO,WHAT THE DUCK
SIRIUSLY, ZAT ZE Fock

I going to Harry X Harem or something!? Because it like Rosario and Vampire!?

I going to Harry X Harem or something!?

Well crap fits I should have finished reading instead of writing a review huh? Oh well, wish you'd un-abandon this!
A.A.

I feel your reasoning for not making Harry the leader is flawed. First he is under a handicap as he has to limit the help he gives. Second, he obviously knows how to lead a successful team. And finally I do actually agree with him not being the leader is just have used other reasons. Like his suitability after the loss of his last team or lack of self confidence as he feels he got his last team killed.
Anywho, can you please update this story... I'll ask for the other stories I like to be updated in the reviews for them.
A.A

It's courtesy, not curtsey. In the first few sentences if you were wondering.

Oh come on! Srsly?!

Umm... I think the leader usually has the first letter in the team name so HYPB should not really fit.

Harry x pyrrha please!

Temperament problems, unhealthy desire to keep their close people safe, red eyes, urge to killwhoever messes with his people, yeah he is a Branwen and Raven's son.

OMG his adopted mother is RAVEN?! Talk about not seeing that coming!

Sad to see this story discontinued but that happens. I simply hope that either sombody takes it up and continues it so masterfully like you or you get back your motivation which would be awesome.

I'm sorry to see you go

get back into rwby, season six was great this this story is funny af

Thanks. Better to be told it us abandoned then hope for an update.

Integration of 2 souls done well. A storyline is there along with Blake's book