Reviews for A Missing Step |
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WeslenBR chapter 12 . 10/12/2019 muito bom |
Silverman1212 chapter 12 . 6/30/2019 damn nice ending and lots of my confusion in earlier chapters were cleared up in this one . loved it . i am sad it ended but there is a sequel i see, i am just not sure if its finished also or not . anyway i really liked this story it was a great sai\tats story . thank you . |
Silverman1212 chapter 11 . 6/30/2019 damn great chapter but i really was expecting him to feel betrayed of why she did it and see some angst and drama , this felt anticlimactic if i have to say . and also confusing at times but overall great . cant wait to read last chapter |
Silverman1212 chapter 10 . 6/30/2019 yeah this was pretty OOC mainly genos , he wouldnt call he out to tease her about the kiss in a million years .still great wait to see his reaction to her identity , he should have know this chapter . |
Silverman1212 chapter 9 . 6/30/2019 i am confused on what she wants to do , well its getting good so lets see what happens . |
Silverman1212 chapter 6 . 6/30/2019 this is great but sometimes i dont understand what they are saying , like that last line . |
Silverman1212 chapter 3 . 6/30/2019 if they didnt fight how do they know each other that well ? if i remember correctly saitama didnt have much interaction with her to know her well and how did she know he was stronger than her ? well still great story so far . |
Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 6/30/2019 this is a great first chapter , liked it . cant wait to read more . |
killernooch chapter 12 . 3/16/2019 this is a great story |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/29/2018 The world needs more fanfics like this |
x4zF4 chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Veri n1c3bPxst0rijD |
Dudtheman chapter 12 . 8/31/2018 love this pairing well done story sad to see it end but thank you for taking the time to give us readers this gift |
Maraderchik chapter 12 . 8/30/2018 It was nice story. |
God Himself chapter 11 . 8/24/2018 This fucking story should be scrapped, or at the very least, rewritten from top to bottom. Admittedly, the start of the story was fairly decent, but now it’s escalated into something I can’t even read without shaking my head. Do this site a favor and take this story off it. - God P.S. You just had fuck up your good start with such shitty writing... |
miczsfar chapter 11 . 8/25/2018 well be damn... Saitama knew all along ! and damnnnnnnn that ending. I was wondering why she acting weird in this chapter than seeing the ending explain alot but why she needs to leave. ? What happen? Can't wait for the next update. |