Reviews for Undying Will |
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Chyllen chapter 11 . 8/27/2019 Sorry it's not that it's not a good book just not what I was expecting not enough Harry or Naruto and to much drama m |
Bobby chapter 32 . 3/11/2019 You should have killed off Hermione. She's nasty and mudblood. |
CrypticSilhouette chapter 50 . 1/4/2019 Really enjoyed this. But, is it over? Pretty confused by the last chapter. Seemed almost like an ending that was slapped on, but none of the conflicts were resolved. Is the story abandoned? |
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 20 . 2/28/2018 Well... This is certainly taking a different turn from anything I was expecting. Not that that's bad, because honestly I don't know what I was expecting. But, wow. Very well written so far and very original. I do hope it gets better soon... Right now it's starting to look like it's leaning towards becoming a darker shade of a story. |
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 1 . 2/28/2018 -heart- OMG, I'm just finishing the first chapter and I think I'm already hooked. I'm so glad I didn't just glanced over this, if this is as good as I think I will be. |
FanGirl chapter 50 . 2/16/2018 Great job so far. |
wildtrance chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 This is a beautiful concept. I look forward to reading it. |
Tsuyo no seishin chapter 50 . 12/6/2017 At this point I don't even know which of your stories I want you to update the most. Despite the monstrous length of your stories, I still find myself facing withdrawal symptoms after catching up on them. I eagerly await my next fix. |
otterylexa chapter 44 . 12/5/2017 I thought this story started out well, but somehow I've lost interest. I don't even know why I don't want to read any more, usually if I read the first 5k words or so, I'll read the whole thing. |
KnowPein chapter 50 . 12/5/2017 It seems kushina is snapes slave Lily is itachi and akatsukis slave So much for there sacrifice A kinda no end story |
KnowPein chapter 32 . 12/5/2017 But animagus in one sip potion Wonder why their are not many animagus running around Its quite high lvl skill and 13 years old are like drink wow yeah It was going well but now just rushed Also Ron's friendship to Harry is bit forced here seems you wanted to follow cannon verse instead of looking for new or other characters Forming golden trio and All... |
KnowPein chapter 30 . 12/5/2017 Really what happened here Enchanting galleons by us year really Hermione a muggleborn casting advanced spells in her first year Harry can be understood as he was under spirits and kushina Was going good let's see if it's ruined any further |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 30 . 11/27/2017 Hell yes! Worlds literally collide. |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 26 . 11/27/2017 So both mother's are prisoners. Great. |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 1 . 11/27/2017 Wow, such wonderful mothers. |