mooooooreeeeee *zombie style*

Great fic! I'm glad Lance got his legs back! Looking forward to the last chapter.

McClain I think was his official name in the older series.

Omg this is so good I need more. Have noticed a few spelling mistakes and words repeated but that's fine I do it all the time. When do you think the next chapter will be out cause it's really good. You would male a great author ()

Cool, I'm curious to see where you'll take this.
Also i think the best analogy for speed-writing I've ever heard is "words got puked onto a google doc"

I love this crippled!Lance AU (especially with all this medical gore - I don't know, I sorta like reading those things... guess I'm a sick person too :P) Curious to find out how Lance is coping with his new condition.

I'm a sucker for detail, and this fic's got it in spades! Keep up the good work, and that well-researched-yet-still-narratively-integrated level of detail!

This is an interesting story! Way darker than anything they would do on the show, but what is fanfiction for? I would like the individual characters' personalities to come out more, but I suppose there hasn't been too much time for that so far. I also had a hard time understanding why exactly the healing pod didn't fix Lance all the way. I can see why it might not be able to fix his back, but it seems like it should have been able to fix the other stuff. Maybe I just missed something. But overall, this is pretty unique. I'm curious to see where you take it.