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Great story. I like how you made all their lives come full circle. I'm glad that you ended with Sho and Kyoko becoming a family once again. Thank you.

I freaking love this story!

He do's have a right to know about his son

Oh so he did not know.

So I am confused. Did she very tell Sho about the baby.

Good but fast

Things are moving fast... very good chapter/story but if you switch to writing in scene it would be even better.

Good over all idea I don't know how I feel about no-one knowing about her Son. Loved the chapter and am looking forward to reading the next one.

An interesting start though I feel the execution left something to be desired. To be honest the most interesting part was Sho's redemption.

Hermoso final ! linda tu historia...gracias

I loved the story!
It was amazing from start to finish! *-*
Congratulations on your excellent work!

You did a great job with this story. I'm glad that Kyoko and Sho finally put the past behind them and became a true family. Not real happy they didn't tell Kuon Jr. but i understand why they didn't. Thank you.

That's a lovely finale...very heartwarming and blissful. Everyone's come full circle. The Hizuri's have their beloved family. Kyoko and Sho made good. Sho knows his son somewhat and is part of his life. And he's having a lovely life.

This feels like Jacob and Bella after Nessie... Will he now call corn aniki too