Damn Hapu why are you still like this? It's like in Golden Wind Abbachio/Giorno

Why is everybody being an ass to him? It's not like he's abusing Mawile/Cutiefly. hell, he doesn't want them to get hurt at all. this just made me annoyed with that teacher and Lima

Seriously I know you can't communicate with me so if you want to answer my previous questions

Hey man how are you doing? I deleted my history which got rid of lake valor for me so when I looked this up I found this... The whole thing soooo why isn't the whole thing on the lake? Srsly dude its great

I like what you did with this chapter, phrasing it as an "invitation" was very creative.

i love this fan fic sooo much it actually made me think of an alternate storyloine to XY and Sun and Moon can you do another based after kalos has been rebuilt and have Lillie and hau return

This was a terrific fanfic! I like your description of what Lana would look like as an adult, and I enjoy seeing Kalos get rebuilt after all the chaos. I don't know what else to say, unfortunately, except that this was a great fanfic! Plus it's nice to see Lana in a starring role in a fanfic.

Before Sun and Moon came out did anyone else guess Lusamine was Lillie and Gladions mom, because I hear some thought she was their sister.

Yes, I was overjoyed to see Emma still alive. As for the little tidbit she mentioned about Calem's family, I thought she made it clear: since Looker gave his name to Calem and adopted Emma, they're both Looker, so they're both siblings.

Honestly, I'm not bothered by how you portray Lana at all. It's very rare to see Lana have a starring role in fanfiction to begin with, as Lillie is a significantly more popular Pokémon Sun and Moon character. So Lana getting the opportunity to experience love is a good thing, in my opinion.

That was really clever, using Noibat against Totem Kommo-o, because in the game, Totem Kommo-o can sometimes call in a Scizor as backup to handle Fairy types, but it has no defense against a Flying-type Hurricane attack.

Anyway, I look forward to future chapters!

I admit, the revelation of what happened to Calem's team was unexpected; I was theorizing they'd been killed by the energy-draining machine Lysandre was going to use to power up his doomsday weapon. I look forward to future chapters.

well I mean it was kind of obvious why Calem gave up the trainer's life given it was implied all his pokemon were killed with the exceptions being Mawile and the Noibat kid.

you think Calem will accept Lana as a mate? like the pokemon kind of mate but with humans?

Understanding. Await the next chapter.

Pretty sure its Yveltal in the black ball.