well done

How it Should Have Ended.

You're probably right. The ending could use a little work. I know, you can add a scene where Jim Dear isn't sure whether or not he and his family should keep Angel. Just throwing out ideas, but good job with the story overall. ;) I really like it.

This was very lovely, good job!

Yeah, the ending could have used some work, but this was a very sweet story never the less. I like it.

Just found this and I really like it. I would like to see what happens when the Junk Yard Dogs realize what happened, or will they just think Angel ran off?

Aw, that was sweet. It the good thing Scamp made the right choice.

That was so sweet!