This is a great story so please update it soon

i love it cant wait for more the story is awesome

I don't think the chapter was too short. The transition to her not having her mask was really sudden though, so maybe a bit more transition would have helped

its still claw-some ;3

What about the coffee with Alya and Nino?

omg! i totally went nuts after reading this. you have so much talent, i can't wait for the next hilarious round.

Another great chapter. And that's the best part of writing, if you can relate it to your life, even a little, it can be a lot more fun to write. I can't wait to keep reading. You're doing great!

YASS LOVE THIS SO MUCH ~ caityclysm xx

I like the origin story, I think that it worked well with Marinette's personality. I also liked Nino's view on the situation, especially when he recognized Adrien.

love it. keep up the great work. Nino I regret to inform you that Marinette...ummm I mean Ladybug is still oblivious to Chat's identity. Meanwhile would you please tell Adrien to picture ladybug with out a mask or get on the computer and replace the mask with her skin color. then tell me who he thinks Ladybug is. If he gets it wrong please punch him in the face.

So excited for the next chapter, this story is amazing keep up the great work :)
caityclysm xx

i'd love to know ladybug's origin! i'm not sure how to start one of those, buti know that you'll make it awesome any-which-way you write it, ;3

This was a good chapter and the origin story sounds very interesting.

love it. keep up the good work.