Reviews for Shadows rising
GHOST09 chapter 29 . 6/24
Not Gonna lie I Love this story ,But when are you going to FUCKING Update
Naelyon chapter 13 . 6/16
I honestly have no words to describe just how incredibly cringe worthy and nonsensical this story has gotten, you're trying to make Mikael look like a badass in his interactions with Cardin but all you're doing is making him look like some edgy try-hard, his reaction to Ruby not following orders and basically going back while she was certain to die is completely illogical and so is his helping out Jaune. When you wrote this story you chose to have him as a teacher and not as a student, yet at the same time you have him acting completely unprofessional, making friends with RWBY and JNPR and having him meddle in their personal lives. You had him sit with them for lunch for god's sake just so you could do the scene with Velvet.
SpectorChris chapter 29 . 5/11
And all caught up! Now I can sleep. . . Is that the sun?
SenuaOfOrkney-ThePictishWarGod chapter 29 . 4/18
Cicero and his madness. That's why I like him. :)
Nikkless chapter 4 . 4/8
really hope mc mother isint from Remnant
Nikkless chapter 3 . 4/8
Short and little rushed
Nikkless chapter 2 . 4/8
why would the mc tell the first person he meets that hes from different world.
Nikkless chapter 1 . 4/8
the only thing i didint like in this chapter was the Mc name
Nikkless chapter 1 . 4/8
Salmon really his last name is a Fish
jonathan.jt.batz chapter 29 . 4/6
My favorite chapters. The ones with the bois making an absolute mess of everything and anything. All the fun!
EddBlackheart chapter 2 . 4/4
It may shock you to know this, but grammar is a thing that exists. You should really consider using it.
odstrules21 chapter 29 . 4/4
Nice chapter! Can't wait for next update!
Artekha chapter 3 . 4/4
So can I get an idea of what Mikael specialized in back on Nirn? With regards to magic I mean, the rest seems obvious. And I guess I'll see rather than ask for spoilers on if he gets aura or not.
Artekha chapter 2 . 4/4
You definitely need better punctuation and capitalization, hopefully future updates include that. Maybe look over things after you're done or find a beta. Still interesting enough to read and follow once I'm done. Even favorite if I didn't only favorite completed stories.
Artekha chapter 1 . 4/4
You forgot a capitalization, but it's good. Looking forward to reading more.
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