I miss you

I love this story author! It's unfortunate it is no longer being updated. If by chance you do decide to upload a cheeky lil' chapter, I shall be waiting.

Such a lovely story! I'd love to read more someday, so I'll leave a follow here.
Though, it's been a year. Perhaps you left these noncanon stories at the end after all, hm?

Continue the story!

I like this story a lot. The characters are great (Lily is one of my favorite OCs of all time), the dialogue is pretty good, and the character growth of Percy is stellar. The only nitpicks I've got was the way The Lightning Thief ended, and the way The Sea of Monsters were glossed over. Otherwise, this story was definitely an engaging read. I hope you update soon!

Where is Lou Ellen?

Mana? WTF? I came here for Percy Jackson not World of Warcraft. If I wanted "mana" I'd go play a boring RPG. Hopefully Lily is just a one-off character.

I’ve read about half the story and you’re right, leaving reviews is a good habit, even if it’s just “good”. But, while I’m here... I love you’re writing. If you’ve got other works, I’d definitely give them a try. I’m stopping after half with this one though is personal preference of au-ness, and Percy’s intelligence, which is so high that I can’t suspend my disbelief anymore, ha. He also seems to have lost a bit of his fun side, but, you can play that off as being from the betrayal in the beginning and what he’s going through, I’m sure. I like the slight canon changes you’ve made, so this isn’t like rereading the book, and I love how you had him die a few times in the beginning- nice choice; keeps it fun.

I love this story. Every time Percy dies he relives his life from the exact same point meaning he will live forever in an endless time loop. Great story!

I’m really diggin this story, great stuff

Honestly, the writing is too, inconsistent for me to continue on, even if the idea itself is intriguing. Good luck.

I like that little tip about proofreading. It's something I can easily support, especially because I've experienced it firsthand.

A new thing. While yes, characters are bound to act OOC in a fanfiction, this initial Hades portrayal makes him seem more like a cartoon villain who twirls his mustache, whereas within the actual book series he was fairly intimidating, and simply another victim.

It's good for a story to have humor, but its pace breaking when the MC names a sword BO. It's a bit overly ridiculous.

I absolutely adore this story!

Love the story so far, just binged it.

Is it abandoned tho? I hope not.