i loved the end good job

how could you end it like that

how could you end it like that

Love it...but makes me so sad!

Hello, my unofficial pen name is Lovey, I was aprehensive initially at the notorious reputations of darker stories that contain matters such as rape and suicide, but I absolutely loved this. I was drawn in by morose curiousity and found myself sucked in by your words, you portrayed such powerful emotions and provided in this short fic more depth and character development then some full length novels. I look foreward to reading more of your works your extremely talented in capturing the pre-established personalities and enhancing them ten-fold to fit your plot. Please keep writing! Thank you! -Lovey

I do agree that Ayato is the only one that could have an actual relationship with her. Sure, he's a bit sadistic but in the anime - she seems to hate it the least when he's the one sucking her blood so I'd imagine that she wouldn't mind the pain TOO MUCH as long as it's him and not one of the others. Like I don't mind her with any of the others but Ayato makes the most sense to me as her main lover if it became a messed up reverse harem.

Me too I think you should do one with Yui being forced to give birth to all the brothers children because I kind of like the idea of Yui having kids with all the brothers I try to find fanfics about it but there are only a few like the consequences of leaving or the moon that embraces the sun they really should have more fanfics about Yui having the brothers kids also can anyone tell me if there any other fanfics about Yui having all of the sakamaki brothers kids

This was so dark but I loved it. Maybe you could do one were yui is forced to have a child with each brother I kinda wanted to know more about the baby thing in this one like the brothers thoughts on it. I'm always looking for fanfic with them being fathers I just find that to be so interesting

This was beyond intense!
All the rape, Yui's "current state" and Ayato.. I don't even know what to think about him! But I'm glad he did what he did in the end of the chapter...
I can't wait for the next one!

Oh my... that was... harsh. Haha, I really didn't see that sort of scenario playing out when I clicked on this! It's kind of refreshing seeing something so dark after seeing so many fics of the boys' sadism being watered down so much they're downright fluffy. Instead, they're sadism is kind of intensified. Great job on this!