Reviews for Marvel's Maelstrom
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19
Super awesome.
copet chapter 31 . 7/20
Do not worry. I still don't like when a story ends this way, but I know you shall use that time to write something you are passionate for again. Do give us a clue when you write something, I do like they way you write. Keep writing. :)
Guest chapter 31 . 7/17
Tf is this
JKingSniper chapter 18 . 7/19
Don't really want Natasha back. Friends maybe but not lover
Guest chapter 19 . 7/16
The way he’s obsessed with Natasha after what she did is super weird.
Fastfang64 chapter 9 . 7/17
2 kilos of cocaine*
greenarrow679 chapter 31 . 7/16
coward
Monster King chapter 31 . 7/14
Awesome
Simianpower chapter 2 . 6/28
The first half of this chapter felt extremely forced. "Work for me." "No." "Work for me." "OK." The second half was actually worse. The SHIELD folks feel like cardboard cutouts who say and do whatever is necessary to show off how awesome Naruto is, and then react to his awesomeness. They don't feel real at any part of this chapter. They start off trying to bully him, for no reason, with no actual idea whether it's a good idea or not. Given that they know about Hulk, you'd think they'd try the soft-sell first, at the very least just to get some information before pulling guns, but they don't. They go straight to guns-to-the-face. What's worse is that it works. After that awful intro, Naruto actually agrees to work with them, which is fucking ridiculous. And then they do a "mission" without discussing capabilities, plans, goals, or command structure AT ALL. He didn't even know that they'd be skydiving until they were over the target. All in all SHIELD comes off as cartoon police who only exist for the Big Hero to overawe them. They're absolutely NOT the most elite paramilitary unit in the world, specializing in weird and powerful shit. They are a joke in this story.

I'll try one more chapter, but so far this is really bad.
Simianpower chapter 1 . 6/28
Feels both slow and rushed at the same time. Which is weird, but whatever. Lots of misused words, so it needs a beta. I'm a bit curious where you're going with this, since as of this chapter the plot hasn't really started yet. This was purely a setup chapter and lacks a real hook.
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 6 . 6/26
He should’ve killed her. Now he has ANOTHER enemy out there.
Darth Prime chapter 31 . 6/25
Just wanted to say thanks for the story, I really enjoyed it and wish you the best in your upcoming writing career.
Also thanks for including the synopsis, so many times I see a fiction just randomly end, leaving me with innumerable questions. This ending helped immensely, so good luck and thanks for all the fish
guest chapter 31 . 6/17
what happened to black widow
thegrison chapter 5 . 6/18
Was ok until you did messed up. A camera can NOT show clear pics of a fight that was over in a second. Most could only show a blur at best. Most cameras at that time run at 30- 60 frames per second. If they are not high tech and made for high speed motion then all you would get us a long blue on each frame. To top it off the toad style would NOT be used in knocking out people. That would be basic of any fight aka a punch or kick.
SakizSuki chapter 31 . 6/17
Oh my Gosh! I just finish reading this. This was one of the greatest works I've read on this site. A true gem! Thank you for giving me closer and write what you had planned. Sadly you are not the first or will be the last writer that moves on in this site that I follow. But one thing you all have in common is that you all do your best to give us an ending and that is so sweet. Thank you! Do keep us updated on your new work that gets published I always buy a book to support great writers. Do your best and follow your dreams and remember this community is always here.
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