Reviews for A Wish on a Comet
TurtleKinkajou22 chapter 50 . 8/9
eeeeee! that is fangirl for pleeeeeeease post soon, I love this story!
xauroragoddessx chapter 51 . 8/9
Hi! I just finished this story and I have to say it is by far one of the best One Piece fanfics that I have read! I really hope you update soon because that was such a cliffhanger!
PoptartzPr1ncess chapter 51 . 7/30
This is literally my new favorite fic! I have been binging one piece so that I can read this! I can’t wait to see what happens next! I love Roses relationship with the crew and I especially love how you’ve written her relationship with Luffy! Keep yourself healthy and safe! I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 51 . 7/26
This is such a great story! I love Rose & her interactions with each crew member, Zoro especially. He's acting like a proper vice captain, attending to issues Luffy overlooks. Can't wait to see how the conversation between him & Rose goes.
NibberWithAHardR chapter 3 . 7/16
This story is picking up, but one of the things that should be eliminated is the use of exclamation points in narration. The formatting, spelling, and grammar is definitely on the good side, which makes you better than about 50 percent of the stories on this site, so good on you
too addicted to fiction chapter 51 . 6/29
What I love about your chapters is they’re all so emotional! Loved the end here. I love her singing, and I’m so curious about the upcoming convo with Zoro. As always, thanks for the great read!
Mathew5641 chapter 51 . 6/28
Loved reading this chapter hope you are safe
zikashigaku chapter 51 . 6/28
I like that Zoro knows her secret, he’s very perceptive despite what ppl think. I’m really looking forward to Water 7 Arc and oooh boy there’s so much to cover but I’m really excited!
Kurasame chapter 51 . 6/28
Here I thought it would take forever to find another story that i really enjoyed and loved reading but here I am and finding this treasure. Definitely this one already belongs to my personal jackpot stories that I will not grow tired of reading.

I don't know where I should start telling you just how awesome this story is. The original was already pretty damn good but in its rewritten form it is probably one of the best one piece fanfictions in existence from my point of view. For me it is without a doubt the best.

Since English is not my native language I can only depend on what I learned in school and caught here and there. In other words it is important for me that the English in stories I read is simple enough that I can follow it without having to look for every 10th word in a dictionary. You are doing an awesome job in that matter. It is always nice and fluently to read without appearing to be too simple or even plain. And if there is a word you can't translate immediately most of the times you can pull of a decent enough meaning from the situation or environment the scene is playing at. Another part of your writing skills where you excel. Closing your eyes you can literally watch how the scenery unfolds before you and plays like a film thanks to your descriptions. It adds a lot of joy while reading this story. Furthermore you "rosed" the story enough so it does not seem like some dull retelling of the one piece story.

Another huge aspect why this story is so amazing is because Zoro finally truly does act like the vice captain of the straw hat pirates, the right hand of Luffy. Pulling here and there some strings or seeking conversations with others especially with Rose about stuff that he consinders not neccessilary a threat but defintly something that has to be talked about because it could cause trouble some way or another.
I am not denying that he had his bad ass moments throughout the story, where he reminded everyone that they are pirates and not just some imposters pretending to be pirates or standing up for his captain but I never saw him as the man behind the future pirate king who is entrusted with everything in case Luffy is absent. For me there is no difference between him and the other strawhats and Luffy trusts him not more that for example Sanji or Nami. It is more like Luffy shoulders the responsibilities of being captain alone without having someone as right hand. So I was utterly confused, when Bartolomeo more or less introduced Zoro to us as the right hand of Luffy for the reasons above, because I never felt that way about Zoro.
Adding to that I think until now all members of the straw hat pirates have been assigned to their current positions by none other than Luffy himself. If my brain doesn't mess up my memories the only exceptions in that matter are Zoro and Jimbei even if Jimbei was already introduced to us as the helmsman of the straw hat pirates but the official anouncement is still missing from Luffy. While I am at it I personaly see Jimbei being the vice captain far more than Zoro because I have trouble in seeing Zoro doing the same Jimbei did after Luffy lost Ace but this is just my personal opinion about that. I could also see some random new member of the straw hat pirates just asking if she/he could be the vice captain and Luffy would be like: "Yeah sure, we are friends after all, right?". I wouldn't be surprised if something like that occures. In the end the only thing i can say after reading your story so far is that in presenting Zoro to us as the vice captain of the straw hat pirates you are doning a far better job than Oda does :D

I think it's is time for the crown jewel of this faniction: Rose.

I will be honest with you. I really don't have any form of clue where i should start showering you with praise for coming up with her as a character. Whether her interactions with the world of one piece, her upbuilding relationships with the straw hat pirates, her sad backstory or her being simply an enourmous enrichment of the story itself. It's like Rose was a missing puzzle piece in the story that has finally been found and returend where it belongs. Building up on that we finally have some more women power in our beloved pirate crew and that is something I probably like the most about Rose. If Oda ever decides to add some romance to his manga he should start looking here because it shows how it should be done.

So in the end just let me thank you for creating this masterpiece of a fanfiction.
Nevermorea chapter 51 . 6/28
*excitedly reads*
*screams with anxiety*
Maxcoolgirl chapter 51 . 6/27
Yay for the new chapter! I was so worried that it won't come with the whole pandemic situation. I'm really happy that the author pulled through.
Please stay safe and wash your hands more often!
Saffron Gales chapter 51 . 6/27
Zore is smart can't wait to her more made my day thank you
Miss Meep chapter 51 . 6/27
Great chapter. I liked the crossover fights, the girls' little bonding session and look forward to this conversation with Zoro.
Guest chapter 51 . 6/27
Ahhhhhhhhh Zoros asking questions!
FrenchyReader chapter 51 . 6/27
I love this story so much ! I look forward to read the next chapter ! !
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