I want to ask about Ichigo ‘s role is he completely eliminating the role of the Main character or not.

The Female spirits have strong ties to the original character that will pose a problem since the original protagonist is a hybrid of a human, and a spirit, which is the reason in how he can seal their powers, and enable him to use their abilities.

boo lol. so disappointed.

Dumbass user below me. Should put spoiler warning before posting a further chapter of DaL.

I have two questions that need to be answered because Shidou is the one that gets the Harem as you know he is not a bad character to say but he can't hold a candle to Ichigo when it comes to fighting.

The question is how will you make Ichigo relevant in the story without his powers because Shido is actually very powerful since he is a Half-Spirit with the ability to use all the powers of any Spirit at once, and use all of their weapons.

I don't know if the relationships that the girls have with Shido will work with Ichigo since he is a bit of a prude and one particular girl is obsessed with revenge.

You have to give Ichigo at least the ability to seal the powers of the spirits like Shido has but Shido also has another power when he seals their powers he also acquires their powers, which makes him not Human because no Human can seal a Spirit or able to use their weapons.

I wonder how does Ichigo handle this problem with these powerful Spirit girls because there are quite a few of them, and some are quite dangerous.

can you tell me who you are going to adopt the story to continue reading the story

I was so excited to see this was updated. Then I got really sad when I read it. RIP awesome story.

thank you for deciding to not delete this story!

I understand that you lose some of your inspiration during the hardest of times i have seen how long has take it for you to post each chapter but that does not mean everyone hates your hystory. I think your hystory has potential and just like the reviewer for this chapter before me say you have people and followers that will support you dearly so my words for you is dont give up and give this hystory his chance to shine. I believe it deserves it dont you think so too everyone?

why don't you just rewrite the story? I don't want to see it discontinued. or I could be a beta reader for you so you ain't gotta discontinue it

can you at least put the story up for adoption? I'm sure somebody can finish it.

I get that, man. Sometimes you just lose that spark. Still, the free chapters here are still enjoyable, so please leave it up!

I love it bro the concept everything, u have to continue, this here is a master piece.

Great chapter. keep up the good work and I hope you continue writing this story in the future. Plus I can't wait to see some Ichigo x Origami moments in the future.

Keep up the good work. I wont deny it somewhat similar to the actual storyline, however, I feel that that the story would be interesting as it progresses. Besides, other fanfictions, whether its regular or crossover fanfiction, use the same storyline sometimes different plot. So don't be discourage.