| Reviews for Free Fall |
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   TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 14 . 7/4 He has no power... EDWARD NEEDS TO GROW UP so DOES EMMENT. They are what? 28? This is a kiddy plot. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 13 . 7/4 I'M CONFUSED, has he had feelings for Bella this whole time? Then what the fuck was the chapter of him acting like he did not? This is ridiculous. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 12 . 7/4 Ok, it seems being children run in the fucking family. Oh boohoo she's your brother's ex.. Also... Having Edward not have feelings for Bella or be aware of them is detrimental to the plot. Cause now it's rather stupid he choose to spend so much alone time with this girl, and asking if she loves Emment when she inquires on if they are having a date... IT'S STUPID now that he isn't aware of his own feelings. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 10 . 7/4 Does she love em or not? Cause honestly It's obvious at this point, Edward is trying to gauge that FOR WHAT EVER REASON. Cause you made it apparent he doesn't know his own feelings for her so that's dumb he keeps saying she loves em or checking that she does,. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 9 . 7/4 Ok this is getting stale... So she had a date... Edward goes and get drunk... I was hoping Edward had secret feelings for her that he had hidden but judging by what you had him think last chapter... That hasn't ever crossed his mind... So he is honestly just being nice to Brother's ex? Really? Taking a girl out and he thinks that a-ok? And if he doesn't have feelings for her, why does he keep asking if she loves emment or not? And having Bella go on a date is so fucking cheap. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 7 . 7/4 She either loves him or not.. If Only Edward would tell Em to grow up to his face.. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 6 . 7/4 Ok this emment is a child. Can you have someone point this out? |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 4 . 7/4 You aren't writing this Bella straight... Maybe that's on purpose cause she seems awfully chummy with Edward. |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 3 . 7/4 Ok what the fuck? Is this dude 5? |
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 2 . 7/4 Ok your Bella just gave me whiplash..Have doubts about her and em but expects a ring? What? |
| TwiTwiAgain chapter 16 . 2/16 I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing your writing talent. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/10/2019 That's a sweet ending, but it seems like there needs to be more. It's very open-ended. Come back. Please. |
| Bevey99 chapter 16 . 8/6/2018 Awe, this was, light, short & sweet. Wish there would have been a bit more, but it ended on the upside. Thanks for writing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 so Emmett and Edward are twins? Do they look like each other? |
| JustARead chapter 16 . 7/8/2018 Yay! |
