Reviews for Constants |
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samus18 chapter 5 . 8/21/2019 What an incredible chapter! 3 The chemistry between Gideon and Sharla is electrifying! I liked the conversation between Gideon and his step-dad at the beginning, too - put a really interesting spin on things. |
samus18 chapter 4 . 8/21/2019 This chapter really was sweet! I love that although you've given Sharla confidence and spirit, it's not overly-done or out of character. You balance her confidence with her kindness so perfectly. I also love the fact that you're not rushing into romance but moving it along at a wonderfully steady pace. Feels so much more real that way. |
samus18 chapter 3 . 8/21/2019 This is such a gem of a Sharla/Gideon story! And I have to say, I love that you're not portraying Sharla as a drunk or as some immature girl with dirty humor. I've come across fics that don't do her justice at all, but so far you've kept her sweet, smart, and with no small amount of integrity and poise. Thank you so much for writing her well, she's my favorite Zootopia character. You've nailed Gideon as well! Can't wait to read on! |
Mithel Celestia chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 After looking up past chapters of Contrast, is "Zach" supposed to be the Pythia? That one slip up she made seems to indicate her boyfriend starts with an N. |
TheUnaccomplishedWriter chapter 8 . 2/17/2018 FINALLY! But seriously, I’m so glad she’s realised her feelings for Gideon. Just have to wait for her to tell him. |
Fox in the hen house chapter 8 . 2/17/2018 Bout damn time you dumb sheep! |
HawkTooth chapter 7 . 2/14/2018 About time I started following this story; been following the others in this particular universe setup. Usually not much for stories based mainly on small side or supporting characters, but occasionally there are a handful written well enough that they manage to keep my attention, and this looks to be one of them. Not to mention I want to see how this ends up tying into the other two tales that this goes along with... |
Stubat chapter 7 . 2/10/2018 Maybe Sharla will jack up this jerk after her pep talk. She's got the smarts, should be able to set 'em up for a nice fall. Maybe talk to Nick about some hustles... Thanks for the new chapter! Looking forward to the next! Stubat |
Jarel Kortan chapter 5 . 11/17/2017 Really liking this story so far, the character development is nicely paced. also on a side note I find it interesting your choice of featuring a flying wing being part of their air force. |
TheUnaccomplishedWriter chapter 6 . 10/2/2017 Great to see you back mate and a brilliant chapter to return with! Can’t wait to see more from you in the future! |
patrickharris98 chapter 6 . 9/20/2017 please add more chapters soon as possible |
DeusExfreak chapter 5 . 7/19/2017 Still a darn good read. But wait...Judy hasn't become a cop yet, has she? Aren't they 19 or 20 here? Judy doesn't become a cop until she's 24. |
TheUnaccomplishedWriter chapter 5 . 7/18/2017 Excellent chapter and I'm loving the slow burn going on! Very believable way for their feelings to develop over years instead of days. |
TheUnaccomplishedWriter chapter 4 . 6/10/2017 Please keep going with these! Gideon x Sharla is such an underrated and underwritten pairing! |
Kara55 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 Gideon x Sharla is so under rated |