I would definitely run away with a pirate James Potter.

‘She’d follow him to the ends of the earth if she had to’ Or time?
‘They were two ships passing through the night.’ Passing closely I hope?

I guess this makes Lily the Killian of the situation, even though James is the pirate? Lovely story, really wish there was more

No! It can’t have ended just like that?! Loved and enjoyed this beauty so much! Thanks.

As per usual, Kathy T gets me before I even have he chance to think about how to express everything. Super cute, I stopped reading it to run errands and was thinking about it the entire time I was around!

oh, it's so beautiful! This story stole my heart

OKAY FIRST OF ALL LOL AT THE PROMPT "instead of stealing treasure you steal me FUCK?" XDXD AND THEN you say you base James off of Killian Jones? as if I didn't have enough reasons to love James Potter *swoons*
omggggg okay this story had me giggling and blushing madly i'm so glad i'm reading this in the dead of the night in my bed in the dark where no one can see me LOL.
anywho I loved the beginning scene with the necklace and how Lily was still sassy even tho she was scared in the midst of a pirate raid and in front of a (cute) pirate who threatened to take out her tongue. LOL but omg at i thought you were gonna have him say he's gonna steal her virginity because this is rated M and you said smut will ensue XD but i'm glad it wasn't. what cute start to their romance *heart eyes*
AND YAY Sirius was brought in! And of course he was injured lmao I see his personality has not changed.. "I fought a shark" "it was a dolphin" HAHAA also omg the scene when they were teaching her how to sword fight all I could see was that one Doctor Who episode where Amy was in pirate gear fighting with a sword. Karen Gillan is one of my headcanon Lily Evans hehee
ANYWHO THIS STORY WAS SUPER CUTE AND SUPER WHOOOOO. LOOOL. I'M ENDING THIS REVIEW HERE SO I CAN READ MORE STORIES. OR YOU KNOW. SLEEP BECAUSE I HAVE WORK IN LIKE FIVE HOURS.
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OKAY YAYAYAY THANKS FOR ANOTHER InCREDIBLY CUTE STORY OMG I LOVED IT (it's written by you so of course) GOOD JOB BE PROUD OF YOUR WORK

More please

I love it!

Lovely!

Really cute! I hope you continue it :)

what a great story

You, miss, have make me incredibly happy

I loved this! Great story.

I can't tell you how excited i always am to read your fics; oneshots and multichaps alike. You're definitely one of the best writers out there and your imaginations in jily fics is like wowww. This was just as beautiful as your other stories. Please keep writing!

I love this so much! As a writer myself, I definitely understand the necessity of writing oneshots, but as a reader, I just really wish this could be a multi-chapter story! Lol.

The plot was great, the writing was great, the characters were great! Loved it all!
The only constructive criticism I can give is more of a proof-reading suggestion than anything else. I just noticed a few times that you wrote "too" instead of "to."
Other than that, though, I really really enjoyed everything about this story and I definitely got the Killian Jones vibe from James before I even read your Author's Note (because I was too impatient to read about pirate James and skipped over it).