Reviews for Facade
Guest chapter 13 . 11/15/2018
Awesome. Could you pls add an epilogue?
Nydon chapter 13 . 5/24/2018
Yes, another chapter like that would be nice, as well as some one on one time to talk about Merlin's magic with him and Arthur. This chapter didn't really bring closure to me between the two of them.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/14/2018
"The welcoming blanket of sleep covered them"
I think it is a brilliant description. As a writer myself I thought it perfect.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
I really enjoy reading your story. Can't wait to finish reading it! Thank you and please continue your work.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/27/2017
Nice ending. I really enjoyed this story. I think an epilogue is needed to wrap it all up. Arthur legalising magic. Mordred receiving his knighthood. Merlin getting another love interest...
Guest chapter 12 . 6/27/2017
Hmm. Interesting.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
Great chapter. The flow was a bit more rushed than previous chapters though. You didn't include the same amount of detail.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
"Sound the bells, spook the chickens, " That had me grinning.
Great chapter.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/27/2017
Wow. That was amazing.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/27/2017
Very clever strategy. Well done!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/27/2017
"the welcoming blanket of sleep covered them. " Beautiful turn of phrase.
Loved the magical fight. The explanations were good. They were needed.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/27/2017
Excellent chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/27/2017
Well thought out spell, lots of detail.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2017
Love the sparring sequence.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/27/2017
Hmm. Interesting that he chose to tell Gaius everything.
doesn't like harming animals...that's definitely Merlin. Lol.
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