Reviews for Harry Potter and the Real Story |
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PureAsDrivenSnow chapter 1 . 2/27/2017 I feel like I'm reading a grocery list. There's not much here aside from birth dates and unnecessary information. I don't think the premise is bad but perhaps spend a little more time on actually telling a story. I know it's just the first chapter but still. |
CasperFarnham chapter 1 . 2/19/2017 Note: I will be adding more to this. This is just the Introduction part. The next chapter will be on the Philosopher's stone. |