Reviews for ash
ThinklingsBooks chapter 1 . 2/24
*apparently, this site no longer alerts people to new pms, but I figured you might get a review alert - I finally saw your message and replied. Sorry!*

But more importantly: I'm now rereading this story yet again. I love how you keep everything so simple, letting the characters show themselves with such depth so flowingly. This always inspires me to want to write something like this.
Possibly after eating a piece of cake.
Nienna Telrunya chapter 28 . 11/9/2019
This is my favorite story I've read in a long time. I'm somewhat reminded of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead - in the best possible way. Thank you for such a beautifully written, thoughtful, evocative story.
Tourfaint chapter 29 . 10/9/2018
That was a nice read. It really feels like we get some closure of the conflict. It's fun to read those character, that always had to lie, when they have nothing to lie for anymore.
ComplicatedYetSimple chapter 29 . 10/4/2018
This story was very good. I'll look into some more of your writing later XD
Animefreak1145 chapter 29 . 4/1/2018
This story...made me sad. As I read about Light and L feeling empty, I was feeling empty along with them.

I couldn't help it. There were even three instances where tears were coming to my eyes and my throats seemed to have closed up. I...I don't even know why.

Is it pity? For both of them? That they're stuck there? Is it understanding on why they did what they did in their life? Or is it just sadness at what this whole thing, the reasons they both died and now they're stuck there together?

It's probably a mix of everything. I don't remember who said it here, Light or L, that there is no definite answer...

If only Light knew that before.

This...I'm reading the next thing you've written cause this...this is beautifully sad.
Suricata chapter 29 . 5/31/2017
I really enjoyed this story, I was secretly hoping for them to become friends at some point. That makes me wonder how different their lifes would have been if they met before they grew bored and indifferent with the world. I'll definitely have a look at your other story now.
Fanfiction Lurker 1 chapter 29 . 5/19/2017
As someone who reads in reversed order ('rot' first, 'ash' second), rot is my favorite. Light dealing with the Shinigami is sweet!
Jane chapter 29 . 5/3/2017
I. LOVED. IT.
I love Kira. Not Light, Kira. And I also adore L, but I was kinda happy when Kira beat him. This story is truly great, it expresses them so well! Keep up the good work!
FlyAtNight chapter 29 . 4/25/2017
I LOVED THIS! And I loved Ink, both stories were very well written & i read both in one sitting. Im excited to read the 3rd one :)
Magic111 chapter 28 . 4/25/2017
I loved your ending! It ended so perfectly and to be totally honest with you, I thought the ending would be more dreary than the ending you wrote. I loved your more optimistic ending than the pessimistic ending I thought it would be.
Guest chapter 29 . 4/24/2017
seems exciting, cant wait! (you're adorable by the way)
Mystic 777 chapter 29 . 4/24/2017
(laughs) Stories twisting on you can be quite amusing. That teaser though, I can just see L getting frustrated over dealing with Light's antics again. XD
Mystic 777 chapter 28 . 4/24/2017
Well, that was nice in a way. At least they have similar experiences...
Fly1ng Grayson chapter 27 . 4/21/2017
Ohhhhhh. Wow this story is amazing. Can't wait so see what the next chapter will be, keep up the good work!
Mystic 777 chapter 27 . 4/20/2017
The thought of ash directly on the eye makes me shudder. That would be so weird... At this point, I'm almost afraid to see what Light would do if he should stumble on a shinigami. XD
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