Reviews for The Vengeful Spirit of Nazarick |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dude love your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() who is the asshole the thief or the man who calls out the thief, he may not have been malicious with his intent, but how is a man to know if the guy who plagiarized his work did it for greed, you are in the right to be upset, he should've known better than to copy a story without consent, I mean the guy has written some stories himself, he should know internet etiquette by now, all he had to do was ask, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh. I like this very much. Both the character of Alcatraz, because it is really realistic, of course there would be a hardcore Roleplayer in Ygdrasil, it is practically made for that. And also that you don‘t just paste Momongas inner Monologue into a Dialogue with someone else but actually create your own that fits both the characters as well as the situations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished chapter 9 and appreciated that someone would point out the absurdity of calling workers "thieves". Certainly most did horrible things but the Foresight (also from Ainz's point of view) are not at all like the others. Then I wanted to ask a question. Arche's memories are being manipulated and it's okay that she doesn't remember well how she got back in the house but her parents, the butler and the sisters don't wonder how she appeared so suddenly? However it made me like that she is alive even though I felt sorry for her companions. I have always found that death absurd, perfectly useless and avoidable. Also I wanted to know if Arche will also return in the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() idk how it looked before you fixed this chapter but you didi a pretty good job thanks making this funfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah no more chapters It was super fun while it lasted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, so its an EXCELLENT, story. The pacing, character interactions and personalities, as well as the specific series of events, all work well. There are issues however, such as not explaining Khorne's backstory, nor explaining how he and Alcatraz met. Then there is the issue of the NUMEROUS spelling, grammatical, AND punctuation mistakes. Now don't get me wrong, it doesn't make it hard to read, but it IS annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oof! Damn. That's rough. It ticks me off that someone plagiarized your work. Although sadly, it doesn't surprise me either. The fanfic site here has had quite a few plagiarism cases that needed to be addressed. Even without knowing more of your case with this guy on Wattpad, I'd bet that he did it over there to try avoiding the repercussions here. Truly, my heart goes out to you on your situation. I really do hope that you're able to get that straightened out. Until then, take care of yourself, and hope to see an update from you in the not-too-distant future. Later. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe the guy did not ask for your consent. What a bastard. At least the person who posted my story asked for permission in order to post it on Wattpad and he let other people know that it was my story and not his. Plus he did it because he enjoyed my story adn wanted to share it with as many people as possible. Hope the guy does what you ask him |
![]() ![]() Hello, First, thanks for your story. Next and maybe more importantly, i'm sorry for your story to be solen (yes it is), good luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to know. Happy May! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, that sucks |
![]() ![]() i know how that feels. at least the guy who put up my story on wattpad, asked for my permission first. try to keep calm, man. you're not alone in your stand against plagirism. andrew warholas |
![]() ![]() Esdeath Gorgon!? It's AU? |
![]() ![]() yo! gud stuf! imma liking this moar! luv the gabe references. keep the chaps coming! |