Reviews for Underneath It All
mstlynknwn chapter 18 . 11/24/2019
yo throughout every fluffy moment i couldn't stop smiling. The battle chapter was epic. I played out the whple thing in my head and honestly it seemed anime worthy. I'm so glad everything in the story went smoothly and happily, I wouldn't have been able to live if a significant disaster occurred.

Anyway, GREAT STORY JESUS CHRIST I HAVE NOT FELT SO MANY FEELINGS IN A SINGLE STORY.
gindensmi chapter 18 . 5/24/2018
Was great! Loved this story!
AkioKuro chapter 18 . 9/10/2017
**I meant grandson in the last review. Oops XD

(Since when can we do two reviews per chapter? o.o)
AkioKuro chapter 18 . 9/10/2017
THIS WAS SO CUTE OMG I WANNA HUG AND CUDDLE WITH ALL THE HATCHLINGS XD

I'm glad that Hiashi has finally accepted the fact that evolving was the only solution to saving mankind. Well obviously his granddaughter most likely helped with that lol.

The SasoDe moment made me laugh X'D May the Gods have mercy on them lmao. I have a question though. Since Jugo is a Nurturer, does that mean he would be carrying the egg? He is so huge compared to Gaara though so I guess it seems a bit awkward if he was the uke in the relationship.-. Same with Sai and Kankuro. Also is there a form of contraception? I know that since Pein is a Nurturer and they tend to be the one that gets pregnant does that mean that he can be the one to carry the egg? How does that work if Konan is his mate? She obviously doesn't have a dick XD

Sorry for all the questions lol. I am happy that you reminded me of this story c': This was a wonderful ending and I have a feeling that I am going to reread this several more times XD
AkioKuro chapter 17 . 9/10/2017
Whoa o.o I don't even know what to say really...

Well maybe one thing: THAT WAS FUCKING EPIC XD
AkioKuro chapter 16 . 9/10/2017
Is it bad that I found myself grinning at Danzo's death? XD I ant wait for the grand battle c:

ONWARD TO BATTLE! XD
AkioKuro chapter 15 . 9/10/2017
HINATA IS PREGNANT! YAY! XD

I can't believe Suigetsu would call Sasuke Sir Foxiness in public. X'D I seems that everyone is ganging up on him with the goal to make him die of embarrassment lol. I guess I shouldn't be too surprised that Suigetsu can do water bullets. Sai's ability also definitely suits him. Can two merpeople share the same abilities? Like, can Sasuke also radiate electricity?

I hope that Danzo kicks the bucket already. I wish he had gotten eaten by a shark or something. He's lucky that Haku is naturally kind and willing to help him...
AkioKuro chapter 14 . 9/10/2017
Dammit now we have to worry about Hiashi AND Danzo destroying Sharingan D: I hope that Jugo is going to be okay; I can't imagine what Gaara must be going through. :c

On a brighter side, FINALLY NARUTO AND HINATA GOT TOGETHER THAT BOY IS SO SLOW I SWEAR TO THE GODS! XD I like aggressive Hinata btw. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) It's pretty hot lol. Maybe if she gets pregnant then her father might realize that unless he is willing to kill his grandchild, this "abomination monsters" won't simply die out as he plans. Besides, babies are so cute! Especially half-fish babies X'D

But please, as much as I love SasoDei, don't let that idiot get pregnant (well at least not anytime soon) because then Danzo and Hiashi won't have to worry about destroying the city. That demon child would probably do that all by itself X'D That or overprotective Sasori. OR HORMONAL DEIDARA I MEAN HE WOULD PROBABLY BLOW THE CITY UP D:

I am very excited about these powers and/or side effects. Does everyone have a talent so to speak? I figured that the healers have, well, healing talents lol. Maybe it is like the healing jutsu in the Narutoverse?

Welp, onto the next chapter! :D
AkioKuro chapter 13 . 9/10/2017
DAMMIT HIASHI STOP RUINING EVERYTHING DX GO GET RUN OVER BY A WHALE OR SOMETHING FFS STAHHHPPP

Oh and also SASUKE FINALLY STOPPED BEING A STUBBORN ASSHOLE AND KISSED SUIGETSU. TOOKE HIM LONG ENOUGH.

Sai and Kankuro are getting along nicely. I was definitely shocked that Kankuro was a Nurturer. I hope that Sai would be able to confess that he and Danzo attempted to assassinate the king. I just hope that Kankuro would still accept him. Jugo and Gaara are also getting along swimmingly ;) Sassy attacking and nearly killing someone who insulted Deidara is hot af. That blond is lucky to have such a wonderful Danna! Well until he acts like a blond and deserves a smack upside the head by Sasori...

Anyways...Naruto stop being an oblivious idiot and get with Hinata already! I want to smack him and get him to finally open his eyes and see the love that Hinata will give him. He and Deidara are the perfect stereotype of a dumb blond -_-
AkioKuro chapter 12 . 9/10/2017
Shut the hell up Hiashi; you are lucky that they chose a decent marine animal DNA to inject in you. If I were them I would have chosen Sea Slug or a Hagfish. HAVE YOU EVER SEEN A HAGFISH?! THAT SHIT IS DISGUSTING AND TERRIFYING. PREPARE FOR NIGHTMARES. THEY ARE ALIENS I SWEAR FFS.

Jugo x Gaara? Where do you come up with these pairings lol. Same with Kankuro x Sai. Your crack ships never cease to amuse me.

ITACHI IS PREGNANT! XD I hope it's a girl c: I do feel bad for him though; Kisame is going to drive him insane. X'D I hope that Chouji and Obito are going to be alright... Danzo is pure evil to even think about leaving Akemi fatherless.
MadaraUchiha-Chan chapter 7 . 8/7/2017
Awww the pairings are too cute, especially ObiRin X3
Hiashi and Danzo I swear...'
MadaraUchiha-Chan chapter 6 . 8/7/2017
Lmao, I swear Suigetsu XD
I have this feeling though...
MadaraUchiha-Chan chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
God...dammit...Danzo...;-;
On the other hand Dei and Saso are too cute, they must be shipped! 0v0
MadaraUchiha-Chan chapter 4 . 8/7/2017
Lmao, Kisame and Itachi are just too adorable, and Danzo's on the road to fucking something up...again.
Commence the Danzo torture! 0v0
For the love of-really Hiashi, really!?
Let's hope someone knocks some sense into him before things get ugly '
MadaraUchiha-Chan chapter 3 . 8/7/2017
Sea slug Danzo...ROTFL XD
Aaaaaand soon there'll be KisIta mer-babies everywhere!
Obito and Rin...I have this feeling 0_0
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