| Reviews for The Haunted Hotel |
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   AuthorETH chapter 16 . 6/29/2018 I loved this big fan of your work where’s the rest I love it what’s gonna happen next? |
| jettmanas chapter 16 . 9/12/2017 Well, what an interesting cause for Hiro's problems. They should insist on their money back and that no one else ever gets that room! |
| jettmanas chapter 15 . 9/12/2017 Oh no, more head injuries. :( |
| jettmanas chapter 14 . 9/12/2017 I'm surprised they let people stay in that room. Any other room and they'd be fine. Alan's warnings were interesting. |
| jettmanas chapter 13 . 9/12/2017 Wow, I'm surprised they didn't leave that place after the assault. And I'm surprised it's still in business. Nice job having them get in touch with Cass. I think her stress levels are about to get worse after their story. |
| jettmanas chapter 12 . 9/12/2017 I hope their brilliant minds weren't damaged from that. Head injuries are serious. Wonder how Tadashi & the others got back to the hotel. Someone call the police about her two assaults! |
| jettmanas chapter 11 . 9/12/2017 Good times, followed by troubles. And a boulder is serious! Not to mention that ending. |
| jettmanas chapter 9 . 9/12/2017 Ok, now Tadashi's talking to her about it. Wow, didn't expect her to know it was real. They should call the news. A priest. Somebody! Mybe the ghost wouldn't appear then though. 0.0 |
| jettmanas chapter 8 . 9/12/2017 Good tension at night with the continued problems. I'm surprised they didn't mention it to the staff in the morning. Nice job with Grand Park. It opened after I moved from L.A., so I never got to see it. I used it in one of my stories too. So the ghost can become solid and leave the hotel- interesting! |
| jettmanas chapter 6 . 9/12/2017 Clever way of cutting back to Alan as the person who saved Hiro. Nice bit of Tadashi being upset with himself before the next problem appeared. |
| jettmanas chapter 5 . 9/12/2017 Interesting conflicts with the noise at night, Tadashi's pain, and now this! |
| jettmanas chapter 4 . 9/12/2017 Nice bit of conflict hinted at here. I like that Tadashi's trying to stay positive though. |
| jettmanas chapter 3 . 9/12/2017 Enjoyed the happiness and innocence of this. I've lived in both San Francisco and L.A. and love both cities. |
| jettmanas chapter 1 . 9/12/2017 I like the short chapter length, especially to start. Clever idea for a story. |
| HiroAngelLight chapter 16 . 7/13/2017 I knew it! She really is attracted to Tadashi! Good thing they will leave soon..and im curious with tadashis surprise for hiro.. well too bad this story is coming to its end..but it will worth it if the last one will be a happy ending..looking forward for the last chapter! |
